Topic: Lonely
undiscoveredgem's photo
Wed 02/17/10 08:50 AM
The sky is gray,
Will it be that kind of day?

Cold side of the bed,
Damn it's a dread!

Wishing for some cheer,
Or perhaps just someone to call me dear.

Longing for a special touch,
Just enough, not too much.

It's all unclear, as if covered with a haze.
I search aimlessly, it's all just a maze.

Eternity of solitude,
Or will he bless me in multitude?

God you know my hear,
But somehow it feels like a target for darts.

My homie, my lover, my friend.
So special only death can bring it to an end.

Your arms are my safe zone.
Safe just like my home.

How great it can be to see eye to eye.
You're not just someone to fill space, you're my guy.

As I cry tears of pain.
I know it all can't be in vain.

I wanna be for you and you for me,
Not just a fish in the big blue sea.

As my faith is low and my hopes are high,
I search within to figure out why.

Is love a fairy tale?
Will I allow my fate to be in the hands of a male?

At times it seems within reach,
Then rality sets in and I realize its as close to me being a peach.

Day in and day out,
My sadness lasts so long, can't even pout.

Lonely....that's the word.
Feels horrible, don't ever mind what you heard.

My eyes fill with tears,
While my heart and soul fill with fears.

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Wed 02/17/10 09:04 AM
Lovely write.flowerforyou

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Wed 02/17/10 09:25 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Peccy's photo
Wed 02/17/10 10:11 AM
Great write

thewaterbearer's photo
Wed 02/17/10 11:30 AM
flowerforyou

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Wed 02/17/10 09:41 PM
Very true very cool,and glad to be reading you on here...
I hope you write more,,,,thanksflowerforyou :heart: :wink:

lonetar25's photo
Wed 02/17/10 09:51 PM
nicely done

and you get lone`s bonus points for the day, for rhymeing ,solitude!

"Eternity of solitude,
Or will he bless me in multitude?"