Topic: Sad
Bishopwg's photo
Fri 02/12/10 06:45 PM
If you should weep softly I'd come running to you.
Done. Skinned your knees on concrete dreams.
Youre scared to lose.
Thats exactly where they want you sworn to never move.
Whisper sweetlyy on the way through.
If you did this to yourself why is it so easy
for me to blame someone else?
Did you promise not to tell them that its making me crazy?
Cause I'm so into myself. Sad.
Girl how did you get so far?
I couldnt follow you.
If yesterdays lucky plays were meant to lose
And all the world with their young girlish self serving well to dos
trampled the flowers on the way through?
I'd only smile and cross the world to be with you.


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Fri 02/12/10 06:47 PM
I really like that. Great write!flowerforyou

thewaterbearer's photo
Fri 02/12/10 06:50 PM

If you should weep softly I'd come running to you.
Done. Skinned your knees on concrete dreams.
Youre scared to lose.
Thats exactly where they want you sworn to never move.
Whisper sweetlyy on the way through.
If you did this to yourself why is it so easy
for me to blame someone else?
Did you promise not to tell them that its making me crazy?
Cause I'm so into myself. Sad.
Girl how did you get so far?
I couldnt follow you.
If yesterdays lucky plays were meant to lose
And all the world with their young girlish self serving well to dos
trampled the flowers on the way through?
I'd only smile and cross the world to be with you.




That is very nicesmile2

no photo
Fri 02/12/10 07:50 PM
drinker drinker COOL write dude!!!!drinker

nvkikigirl's photo
Fri 02/12/10 09:40 PM
i agree..very nice..drinker