Topic: Whipping Toy
me2g's photo
Thu 01/28/10 09:19 PM
Spoken lies are so decieving.
Broken life I feel him leaning.
Once again but no one believes me.
Close my eyes just lose all feeling.
Hope someday someone frees me pleeEAase!!!

Night falls again, the silence grows.
These walls close in I lay here froze.
Hinges squeek, footsteps, breathing.
This cant be real, I must dreaming.
What the hell! GOD DONT YOU HEAR ME?

Mothers here, but not really..
Not concerned, just doin her own thing.
Her own world.... that shes created.
To escape, the one shes jaded.
Someone please someone please!!

Afraid to cry, REAL MEN DONT DO THAT!
Daddy says, so just sit and take it!
I dont know im soo confused.
So I lash out, to hide whats bruises.
help me cry help me die why am i alive!!!!!indifferent




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Fri 01/29/10 12:49 PM
drinker flowers

normalweirdo's photo
Fri 01/29/10 01:04 PM
Very compelling - thank you for sharing it!

MzEm's photo
Fri 01/29/10 01:38 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 01/30/10 08:47 AM
very heartfelt-thanks for sharingflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 01/31/10 04:03 PM
Thanks, for sharing your poem sounds like it came from the heart.

me2g's photo
Mon 02/01/10 01:33 PM
thanks all.... it was written with intent, for someone very dear to me.