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im playing a down tune
a shaman in an indian headdress swims in a pilgrims meadow there is laughter under meadow down in the lowlands hope is drawing swords facing the faceless in droves and droves why hope for a square box why have square memories sworn in justice rolling eyes in droves and droves while a swan looking over in blue hope wings in |
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I honestly don't quite get it, jimz, but I definitely like it. Especially the middle stanza... very well phrased. Dig it.
Cheers. |
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Marvelous...
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To a new day my friend
(((Jimmy))) 
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aqnd a bigggggggggggg hug! Tammy
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im playing a down tune a shaman in an indian headdress swims in a pilgrims meadow there is laughter under meadow down in the lowlands hope is drawing swords facing the faceless in droves and droves why hope for a square box why have square memories sworn in justice rolling eyes in droves and droves while a swan looking over in blue hope wings in |
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(((jimmy)))
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To have never been seen as a people, slaughtered and killed.
The birth of new tomorrows lay tame, in this age-less game. With sword crossed across thy chest, I bow....
Nice poem bro...... 
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