Topic: BITTER END
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Thu 01/14/10 05:11 PM
Why are you scared young child,
why are you scared?
dont let deaths mistery make you afraid,
you have lots to give,much love to be shared.
Your face is soft and tender its pink or a light red.

Why are you scared old man,
why are you scared?
dont let deaths mistery make you afraid.
You gave what you could give,
loved and truelly cared
but now your old and pale,
your mind cant comprehend
that to a great beggining there
is always a bitter end.

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Thu 01/14/10 06:31 PM
Nice...flowerforyou

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Fri 01/15/10 10:56 AM
thank you:smile:

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Sat 01/16/10 10:54 AM
One man's life of bitter rage, and lustful crave.
Turns into mellow, skin turnned yellow, silently with his age.

Nice write bro....drinker

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Sat 01/16/10 11:19 AM
Edited by celestialpoet on Sat 01/16/10 11:19 AM
thank you it seems like you get the poem nice!drinker