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Lately, it's a theme A song running through My mind on rewind Forms a simple statement "Is this as good as it gets?" Cause I might want A do over, since I'm underwhelmed To this point In this life The strife, the Everyday, same way Maze that causes A hazy, sluggish pace Slow motion action Never keeping step With the dialog Held with myself Dreaming in pin point Accuracy thinking This it it- bullseye The shot misfires Again and again The target clear But hard as I squint Never fully in sight I want to say Bite me, give me A meal that fills Satiates, dissipates This discontent My emotions Spent, sent and Repent I must For a life unjust I wish I could trust Just once what Stands before me Clearly a vision I refuse to see Opting instead For an unrealistic plan And in the end Barely hanging on By a thread |
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this is great
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![]() ![]() love back at ya ![]() |
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yes..so well understood.
I appreciate your ability to pinpoint. |
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Great write P....
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Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead.
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Absolutely captivating, pkd.
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Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead. ![]() yeh..what she said |
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Awesome write A+++
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Jimmy- peace to you
![]() thanks kc ![]() Gossipmpm-thanks ![]() Sharris-thanks darling, you always have such great adds MzEm-thanks-hope classes are going well ![]() plastic- captivating...I like that word ![]() RawB- Thanks for the great grade!!! |
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Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead. ![]() rope, duct tape...maybe dull the senses with a few margaritas and the shooting will improve ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() Troubled, all my thinking doubled, reconfirming I am puzzled. ![]() Through your words and open heart, Truly you are. One-of-a-kind..... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() If EVER that thread pulls apart,,,, You can always fall into this man's heart. ![]() |
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thanks Ms Teddy
![]() ![]() duct tape can hold all kinds of things together ![]() T-sorry you're in my state of mind. ![]() ![]() |
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I really love this, the words come together so well. I feel that way alot.
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I really love this, the words come together so well. I feel that way alot. ![]() Thank you kindly Calleigh ![]() ![]() |
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