Topic: ERASABLE SHADOW
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Sun 01/10/10 05:53 PM
I travel through dreams that are unecessary and broken.
Illusive prisoner of a world that's unspoken.
like a dried up leaf that flyes in the winds,
imaginary flight over stories and loud screams.

I navigate the sea of things that are exact,
stuck in a life that isnt just an act.
like if I was a cloud that moves in the sky,
I dont want to touch the ground and feel what it means to die.

I dont have time to change my life, this world is so low
its made me an erasable shadow,
and even though iam the same person that made your eyes shed cold tears
I still need your help to fight off these dark fears.....


john valadez

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Sun 01/10/10 07:03 PM
Nice write...flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 01/10/10 07:05 PM
welcome...drinker

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Sun 01/10/10 07:13 PM
Thank you!:smile:

Sharris's photo
Sun 01/10/10 07:24 PM
Love the movement, well written.
welcome..

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Mon 01/11/10 07:43 AM
nicely done- welcomewaving

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Mon 01/11/10 08:47 AM
I must say after looking at your age I'm impressed...... may your ink well never run dry....:thumbsup:

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Mon 01/11/10 07:24 PM
:smile: thank you so much

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Mon 01/11/10 07:33 PM
:heart: