Topic: Amen
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Wed 12/30/09 09:42 PM
Edited by truelyme420 on Wed 12/30/09 09:57 PM
You're mothers' child
but night lays you down
hair aflame, wile look in your eye
Naked belly to the ground
A forest fire
Nibbles at your veins
Crawls up your arm
runs away with your mind
And burns dry thoughts like leaves
Amen
Eyes stare up
but something's in the way
In the Bible only angels have wings
And the rest must wait to be saved
A dry tongue
Screams at the sky
But the wind just breathes words in
As a strange bird tries to fly
Amen
Pieces of us die everyday
As though our flesh were hell
Such injustice, as children we are told
That from God we fell.
Where are my angels?
Where's my golden one?
Where's my hope
now that my heroes have gone?
Some are being beaten
Some are being born.
And some can't tell the difference anymore
Amen
Hallelujah
Hallelujah

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Wed 12/30/09 09:45 PM
Wow, that was amazing.flowerforyou

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Wed 12/30/09 09:57 PM
Into this world we're thrown, with many things gone wrong.
All we can see to be, is to try and live it strong..

Your poem is very good,,,thanks for sharing,,,,,flowerforyou

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Wed 12/30/09 10:06 PM
Edited by truelyme420 on Wed 12/30/09 10:07 PM
I should let you know that it isnt mine,:wink: it is a friend of mine who wrote it. She is very talented only doesn't realize it. I thought I'd put this here and show her the results. Thank You For replying.

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Wed 12/30/09 10:09 PM

I should let you know that it isnt mine,:wink: it is a friend of mine who wrote it. She is very talented only doesn't realize it. I thought I'd put this here and show her the results. Thank You For replying.
:wink: YOU should TRY ONE,,,of your own making,,,
what the heck???? We won't laugh or insult,,,just read,,,promise.