Topic: ~ it's starting...
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Sun 12/27/09 06:18 AM
it's starting...

I feel

creeping tentacles

moving through me

I fight

the spreading

of lowness

reaching ever reaching

as it covers

my heart

and I fight

the settling in

knowing

pain will multiply

after tomorrow morning

my fight will be over

and


I will

hurt




Sharris's photo
Sun 12/27/09 06:23 AM
I hate it when everyone leaves.

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Sun 12/27/09 07:04 AM
Dig it. "creeping tentacles"
Loved the imagination in this piece.

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Sun 12/27/09 07:32 AM
the pain, multiplied by "two"....harp on the memories you made and shared, though they can never be compared...cyber hug

cherie091279's photo
Sun 12/27/09 07:50 AM
Very nice. flowerforyou

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Sun 12/27/09 08:21 AM
shared perfume,makeup...
shared laughter,christmas...
shared goodbyes...
& I know whats coming...
tight hugs..whispered I love yous...blinding tears as I gently release them and myself...always one of them holding me tighter..and I force myself to turn away...


thankyou for the lovely comments...
teasingbrunette

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Sun 12/27/09 09:27 AM
always one of them holding me tighter..and I force myself to turn away...

^ahh those built in defense mechanisms, we cling to them far tighter then anyone could ever hold us, and yet for some odd reason they give us strength and make us even weaker at the same time....Hoping the New year brings you more joyful times....

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Sun 12/27/09 10:33 AM
an emotional avalanche

smile

a new year of...everything.

:heart:






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Sun 12/27/09 12:31 PM
That's exactly how I feel when I get really depressed. You captured it perfectly. Great write.flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 12/27/09 01:04 PM
flowerforyou