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kalunda · 2009-12-21T07:32:03-08:00

reached my hand, she grasp it, pulled close to touch my cheek... looking in her eyes, I knew...this is the love I seek. pain was deep beneath those eyes, I understood the sadness... all she seeks is comfort now, someone to share in gladness.

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kalunda Joined Fri 06/19/09 Posts: 284	Mon 12/21/09 07:32 AM
reached my hand, she grasp it, pulled close to touch my cheek... looking in her eyes, I knew...this is the love I seek. pain was deep beneath those eyes, I understood the sadness... all she seeks is comfort now, someone to share in gladness.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 12/21/09 07:34 AM
I understand this, deeply

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 12/21/09 07:58 AM
nice write

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 12/21/09 10:34 AM


carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Mon 12/21/09 06:42 PM
very nice

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