Topic: Hooked
Sharris's photo
Sun 12/20/09 09:14 PM
Edited by Sharris on Sun 12/20/09 09:27 PM
Hooked

Look again.
See, though,
I surface briefly,
I do not stay where
you think I should be.
First I am here.
In a flash the line
has been cast too far.
Wait for the evening's cool.
You will not find me again, until.
Until, the water has beckoned with the light.
In blind admiration, I see high above me.
Yet, depth and height precludes
perception's angle of understanding.
In due time we will catch on.

Raine Les 12/20/2009

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 12/20/09 09:33 PM

Hooked

Look again.
See, though,
I surface briefly,
I do not stay where
you think I should be.
First I am here.
In a flash the line
has been cast too far.
Wait for the evening's cool.
You will not find me again, until.
Until, the water has beckoned with the light.
In blind admiration, I see high above me.
Yet, depth and height precludes
perception's angle of understanding.
In due time we will catch on.

Raine Les 12/20/2009
flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 12/21/09 05:52 AM
perception's angle

^the wording in this is absolutely divine, know what an angler is...lol, nice touch, hook, line and thinker.....

one should never be, where other expect them to be, it takes the mystery out of life itself.....now where am I, stuck somewhere between this write and the next one....have a great holiday.

Sharris's photo
Mon 12/21/09 06:28 AM

perception's angle

^the wording in this is absolutely divine, know what an angler is...lol, nice touch, hook, line and thinker.....

one should never be, where other expect them to be, it takes the mystery out of life itself.....now where am I, stuck somewhere between this write and the next one....have a great holiday.

I grew up with fishermen..the big ones that got away.
Merry Christmas to you as well..

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:08 AM
you grew up, since when.....too funny.....

ever fly fish, that's fishing

Sharris's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:13 AM

you grew up, since when.....too funny.....

ever fly fish, that's fishing


yes, fly..and I stand corrected..such a quick wit..you are..I always enjoy seeing who, how and why someone responds to a writing..That is my enjoyment.