Painting the Night Sky

you paint the night sky with your kiss
every soft touch
leaving shooting stars in its wake
the caress of your skin
tugs the moonbeams be to glow brighter, and stronger
like the strings of my heart
strumming a melody
of longing murmurs and wistful sighs
your lips are swallowing black holes
draining the breath of my being
lost in the inky darkness of lust
Twilight is the haven for our passion
cloaking the truth from the Daylight
you only love me in the shadows
dusky mornings chasing our tenderness away
the Sun is my enemy
a mirror I can’t escape

Great write.

thank you ma'm :)

nicely done...

love this line

you only love me in the shadows

welcome

thank you guys so very much!
I really appreciate it :)

Very nice write...

lost in the inky darkness of lust
Twilight is the haven for our passion
cloaking the truth from the Daylight
you only love me in the shadows
dusky mornings chasing our tenderness away
the Sun is my enemy
a mirror I can’t escape

^an awesome ending, a joy to read, imaginativge and captivating....The sun is thine enemy, reflections are usually haunting....nice

thank you huck!
this is actually one of the 3 poems I had already selected to go in my portfolio!
so im really glad you liked it!

Very nice

Nice