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Cold, cold air tense within her chest...
The rock, unsteady, beneath her feet. Hold it, keep it in...a tingling sensation... Now leap with no regrets. Falling...falling...frigid wind against the face... And the ears...but not the eyes...they are sealed with iced-over tears. Arms take feathery stations...a graceful pose...of desperation. Let go...below...almost there... that watery destination... that final peace... where body and blackened depths collide... then co-mingle effervescently... and time slows down and cradles the two... in tragic harmony. |
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very nice
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wow, this my favorite of yours of the few I read
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Great Read!
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To embrace life leaving.....Very nicely shown,,,,
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very nice piece...
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Thank you
Must be thinking on death at some kind of crazy level unbeknownst to me. It was not what I set out to write. Funny that, how a write can take over your intentions. And thank you for reading...most appreciated
Tameria |
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Thank you
Must be thinking on death at some kind of crazy level unbeknownst to me. It was not what I set out to write. Funny that, how a write can take over your intentions. And thank you for reading...most appreciated
Tameria I guess it lays in our thinking processes,,,,maybe we really are writing what it wants us to,,and every so often we awake,wink,lol |
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Last one, promise :)
Just reminiscing... |
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Last one, promise :) Just reminiscing... Thanks for bumping up your writes... 
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Cold, cold air tense within her chest... The rock, unsteady, beneath her feet. Hold it, keep it in...a tingling sensation... Now leap with no regrets. Falling...falling...frigid wind against the face... And the ears...but not the eyes...they are sealed with iced-over tears. Arms take feathery stations...a graceful pose...of desperation. Let go...below...almost there... that watery destination... that final peace... where body and blackened depths collide... then co-mingle effervescently... and time slows down and cradles the two... in tragic harmony. Wow . . . speechless. I loved this |
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Thanks!
  Hard to believe, 3 years ago!
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So glad you bumped this Tameria!..."Now leap with no regrets" took me to the final scene in the movie "Thelma and Louise" when they held hands and drove into the canyon!...Love this piece!
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