Topic: ~ notice
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Tue 12/01/09 06:32 AM


days of nothing


your eyes so empty

I could step out of them

walking away


and you'd never notice

jimz's photo
Tue 12/01/09 07:03 AM



days of nothing


your eyes so empty

I could step out of them

walking away


and you'd never notice


nice

Sharris's photo
Tue 12/01/09 08:44 AM



days of nothing


your eyes so empty

I could step out of them

walking away


and you'd never notice


Never Say Never

I remember the nights
my tears stained our bed
that far away look
me knowing and dread.
When you left us
the last look, no focus,
Cold silent, no life.
I knew you didn't notice.

RL 12/1/2009

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Tue 12/01/09 09:02 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Tue 12/01/09 09:15 AM
maybe, if your sneakers weren't pink one wouldn't notice, but it would almost be impossible and I think that's why they are there, you want to be noticed....QQing...lmao

interesting write, short and powerful.....

Sharris's photo
Tue 12/01/09 11:07 AM

maybe, if your sneakers weren't pink one wouldn't notice, but it would almost be impossible and I think that's why they are there, you want to be noticed....QQing...lmao

interesting write, short and powerful.....

a very good point

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Tue 12/01/09 11:42 AM
just me... writing thanks for viewing...

Finn...you should be thanking me for your lmao...

Sharris....he doesn't need encouragement..;)
never say never...flowerforyou


Sharris's photo
Tue 12/01/09 11:45 AM

just me... writing thanks for viewing...

Finn...you should be thanking me for your lmao...

Sharris....he doesn't need encouragement..;)
never say never...flowerforyou



cookies and candy canes..that's all