Topic: ~ day of glass
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Fri 11/27/09 08:58 AM
~ day of glass


outside it's rainsnowing

sheets of wet,gossamer crystal

soft gray blanket sky

wrapping around the mountains


I broke a glass

sliver edge

web of fine cracks

makes imperfect crystal


I am the day and the glass

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Fri 11/27/09 09:02 AM
I break glasses all the time just to stare at my heart

liked the metaphors

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 11/27/09 04:13 PM

~ day of glass


outside it's rainsnowing

sheets of wet,gossamer crystal

soft gray blanket sky

wrapping around the mountains


I broke a glass

sliver edge

web of fine cracks

makes imperfect crystal


I am the day and the glass
flowerforyou

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Fri 11/27/09 04:22 PM
niceflowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Fri 11/27/09 06:05 PM
nice, very nice

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Sat 11/28/09 09:23 AM
thankyou to all that take time and read...and thankyou to the ones who remark too.....flowerforyou

Finn...thinking...that line you wrote I could work it into the poem...thinkin'

teasingbrunette

flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Sat 11/28/09 09:26 AM
shards, my heart
shattered kaledioscope
nary a rainbow
until you smiled....

mushy mushy

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Sat 11/28/09 09:30 AM
so poetic...muchy mushy....had to...smile.