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Silence,
the whir of the dishwasher a distant car, thoughts that won't cease, alone. sad, missing, cold, gone. alone. four walls, memories, still missing, alone. quietness, blank walls, mixed emotions, still alone! |
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being alone sucks..great write
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Silence, the whir of the dishwasher a distant car, thoughts that won't cease, alone. sad, missing, cold, gone. alone. four walls, memories, still missing, alone. quietness, blank walls, mixed emotions, still alone! alone has so many faces, |
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echoes of Poe, alone...nicely done
wish I had a dishwasher, then I wouldn't feel so "alone"...lol |
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Edited by
sweetsimplesassy
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Thu 11/26/09 09:49 PM
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echoes of Poe, alone...nicely done wish I had a dishwasher, then I wouldn't feel so "alone"...lol TY! I actually just moved into this place Friday(hence the blank walls, ect in the poem) Havent had a dishwasher in 4ever...lol (literally yrs) I appreciate your comments. :) ps...you can come over and we can sit and listen to the dishwasher together LMAO |
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ha, I'm old fashioned, I'll wash you dry...lol
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Silence, the whir of the dishwasher a distant car, thoughts that won't cease, alone. sad, missing, cold, gone. alone. four walls, memories, still missing, alone. quietness, blank walls, mixed emotions, still alone! |
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ha, I'm old fashioned, I'll wash you dry...lol thats the fun way to do it....lol It is weird not having so many dishes to do by hand, not that just me and my 5 yr old have a lot anyways, but... well shoot......we'll do the dishes by hand and run the washer just to hear the "whir" of it...lol (just for good measure...lol) |
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That's alone .but when you fall in love and ther not ther that's more loney yet. Hay be me dishwasher and you won't be alone ...lol..
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Silence, the whir of the dishwasher a distant car, thoughts that won't cease, alone. sad, missing, cold, gone. alone. four walls, memories, still missing, alone. quietness, blank walls, mixed emotions, still alone! alone has so many faces, This was nice to read, yet over-powering to remind me, I am in the place, to have that face, never seen my trace Smile-and the world smiles within you, frown, and the world outside you, stares. wink..... |
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