Topic: Beyond the scope
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Wed 11/25/09 06:14 AM
Beyond the scope

ah love
unimaginable
tangled emotions
a lifelong quest

unconditional bliss
silken petals
smooth ribbons
comfort thy heart

raging waters
occasional storms
cease to exist
with compassionate words

lilies sprout
o'er majestic fields
intoxicating scent
drunken stupor

tearfully caressed
upon a bossom
drowning in hope
beyond the scope.


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Wed 11/25/09 06:46 AM
Finn..
showing a bit of a softer shade of your writing..
like it...
teasingbrunette

sweetsimplesassy's photo
Thu 11/26/09 10:26 PM

Beyond the scope

ah love
unimaginable
tangled emotions
a lifelong quest

unconditional bliss
silken petals
smooth ribbons
comfort thy heart

raging waters
occasional storms
cease to exist
with compassionate words

lilies sprout
o'er majestic fields
intoxicating scent
drunken stupor

tearfully caressed
upon a bossom
drowning in hope
beyond the scope.






flowerforyou
I'm imagining in reading this a love, romantic, sexfilled relationship of two people who so are in love, yet have the trials and still work things out and are inseperable to each other.

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Fri 11/27/09 04:21 PM
what a lovely poemflowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 11/27/09 10:56 PM
nice piece...drinker