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the chimes
of the goddess the earth of her fever the ocean has swallowed to the down the afternoon velvet meadow the dew of the river dragon keeps the moist evil his eyes down |
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the chimes of the goddess the earth of her fever the ocean has swallowed to the down the afternoon velvet meadow the dew of the river dragon keeps the moist evil his eyes down 
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jimz....like your writes....teasingbrunette
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good write
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Jimz, you are so talented and such a joy to read, I admire your work, but count the word "The" in this....almost enough for two more lines, anyhow, it was so good I could even forgive the blahs, I mean the "the's"
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chimes of the goddess
earth her fever the sea has swallowed to the down in the velvet meadow the dew of the river dragon keeps the moist evil his eyes down thank you, HuckleberryFinn |
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now see that's what I'm talking about, read so much better .....No problem, everyones a critic these days, me I'm just an a.s.s./////lol, have a great holiday.
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