Topic: Saying goodbye
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Sun 11/22/09 04:05 AM
Edited by iam4u on Sun 11/22/09 04:10 AM
Laying in bed last night,

I tossed and I turned,

just didn't feel right.

So I took a walk through the empty rooms

trying to lift my gloom.

Knowing tomorrow I have to say goodbye,

just thinking about it

makes me want to cry.

Showered and shaved, laid my suit out on the bed.

I picture you there waiting, in that pretty blue shinny dress.

As a tear runs down my cheek, and my eyes turn burning red.

been thinking of how to say it, so I don't fall all apart.

Started driving to the place we're suppose to meet.

I told you this day would never come, I Prayed from my heart.

You always said, I'm always late, but today, you won't have to wait

I quietly parked the car, walked up to the door and stepped on in.

Walked over to where she was, I slowly placed my hands on hers.

Bent over and gave her a kiss, and whispered the words from within.

Goodbye mom, I love you so. I will never let your love go.

Clenching her hands as I laid over her and cried.:heart:



Written for a dear friend.


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Sun 11/22/09 04:18 AM
That is a really great thing to write for a friend. If i'm correct its about the loss of his/her mother. I lost my mom about three years ago.I still miss her very much. Thank you for sharing. Made me think of my mothersad2:smile:

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Sun 11/22/09 06:52 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 11/22/09 10:25 AM
flowerforyou :cry:

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Sun 11/22/09 10:28 AM
flowerforyou nice writeflowerforyou

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Sun 11/22/09 10:31 AM
oh, terry...now i'm crying.

goose bumps, babe.

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Sun 11/22/09 10:36 AM
:cry: :cry: brokenheart

beautiful

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Sun 11/22/09 12:12 PM
:cry: :heart: (((T)))

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Sun 11/22/09 01:55 PM
:heart: After recently spending a great mount of time with my mother, who was very sick,(she's good now)The thoughts of all this had flashed by in my own thoughts then.

I have had some friends here who have recently lost their mother's
and this was to show them I cared and to allow their hearts to know
we will all feel the sadness it brings when they leave us in this world. :heart:


I didn't want to depress anyone, just to let their hearts peek into its self for a chance to see a mother's love and your own for them.

Thank you all so much for taking the time to read this,,
Your replies have made me re-kidle the affections I have for ALL of you...THIS is why FRIENDS on here, STAY friends on here,wink...

:heart: I hope all the mom's out here who are living, have YOU in their hearts and by their sides.....
And if NOT, you need to MAKE that happen...
Because when life leaves, words,,,,will NEVER be said back..
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Sun 11/22/09 02:24 PM
For all the people you meet, you learn from them or take knowledge from them and if you must say goodbye for the other person to go onto another place you pass a torch and keep going. The torch you carry and pass keeps the memory going on.

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Sun 11/22/09 02:24 PM
For all the people you meet, you learn from them or take knowledge from them and if you must say goodbye for the other person to go onto another place you pass a torch and keep going. The torch you carry and pass keeps the memory going on.

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Sun 11/22/09 02:28 PM
Very beautiful....flowerforyou

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Sun 11/22/09 02:41 PM
My Dad passed away recently. Did the same thing

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Sun 11/22/09 03:55 PM
What a beautiful gift to offer...I am truly touched. Crying as I write this. Thank you so much my friend.:heart:

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Sun 11/22/09 08:24 PM
Awww- That was so beautiful and so well written "T".

You are such a love bug..smitten

You are always so king and thoughtful.God Bless you!!

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Sun 11/22/09 09:22 PM

Awww- That was so beautiful and so well written "T".

You are such a love bug..smitten

You are always so king and thoughtful.God Bless you!!



bigsmile Was THAT,,,as in Martin Luther??? or just in King general,,,,lol,lolrofl rofl

YOU NEVER give type-o's,,,I LOVE IT!!!!!!!slaphead

I know it was,,,kind,wink.....lol
And Thank You Tressa,,,your a sweetheart and a great critic, of mine

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Sun 11/22/09 09:30 PM
So very beautiful Terry!

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Sun 11/22/09 09:34 PM

What a beautiful gift to offer...I am truly touched. Crying as I write this. Thank you so much my friend.:heart:
Tears that fall, will return to where they started,
I am pleased that it honored you and your loss...
I will still PRAY for you and keep you in my thoughts...

Mom's make this life here,,,,,,unforgettable!!!!!:heart:

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Sun 11/22/09 09:39 PM

That is a really great thing to write for a friend. If i'm correct its about the loss of his/her mother. I lost my mom about three years ago.I still miss her very much. Thank you for sharing. Made me think of my mothersad2:smile:
[/quote:heart: Your very welcome and I am sorry to hear of her passing,,,I look at death, and memories as something we have to keep with us as long as we can,,,,,,,if it was not for us to BE reminded in some way,,,of them,,,,,we would never pass on their memories to others......and share their lives a bit...
So to me,,,its a good thing to have something remind you,wink..
And I am glad, THIS did that....:heart: :wink:
Thanks for your words here,,,,

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Wed 11/25/09 08:26 AM

My Dad passed away recently. Did the same thing
:heart: I am sorry for you loss, and I hope you know,he's always with you NOW. Never to see, yet feel his spirit around all of you..May GOD bless you and your family,,:heart: