Topic: Blowing out the candle
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Tue 11/10/09 09:26 PM


Blowing out the candle

Your words cut through me like a winter day.
A vision of heartache blinds my perception of yesterday.
Funny how quickly life changes, and still seems to stay the same.
So we tried....
So we cried....
So here we are again at the beginning of the end.

Blowing out the candle of my heart.

Apologizing for all the words never said.
Thoughts blend into colorful confusion.
Still, here I stand in judgment of myself.
A verdict of heartbreak is given without appeal.
So we tried...
So we cried...
So here we are again at the beginning of the end.

Blowing out the candle of my heart.

Autumn cappuccino an cinnamon smiles.
Another twisted rainy day melts my smile slowly away.
It is what it is, but what it is, will never be what it was again.
So we tried...
So we cried...
So here we are again at the beginning of the end.

Blowing out the candle of true love.


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Wed 11/11/09 06:08 PM
Fab write Up2Us...Loved it...

Sharris's photo
Wed 11/11/09 06:20 PM
a tremendous visual,
you can see the sadness as the smoke curls and disappears.. bittersweet.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/11/09 07:00 PM
At times we don't see things till it is too late...good writebigsmile

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Thu 11/12/09 05:48 AM
Thanks....flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Thu 11/12/09 05:59 AM
Nicely done! :thumbsup:

pkh's photo
Thu 11/12/09 07:44 AM
always enjoy