Topic: Would You? | |
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Would you fly to me and embrace my heart. Share with me this you I feel, let it be our start. Lay with me, naked upon this night. Let us float together in our dreams, in this breathless flight. Holding you close against my skin, until the morning light. Finding peace within your touch, GOD I miss you so much. Time to share our deepest sighs, with no tomorrow goodbyes. Memories standing straight and true. For the sake of saying, I love you! adding on to your poem would you fly to the moon with me and win my heart and soul to keep. embrace each other in our arms and touch each other with our smiles, and share our thoughts, and re learn from each mistake we have encounter through out time. never say the word goodbye always say hello we shall see each other again.. Just my own opinion,adding to a persons poems is something that is not needed,it should be left as it was intended.Ever heard the phrase 'less is more' Words offend here in many ways,,and Queen is my friend and she or anyone can write anything of HEART,,to ANY of my words here or in the forums,wink..Now if their BASHING me,,,THATS a whole nother story,,lol,lol,lol As always,,,ITS ALL GOOD,wink... Point taken,no offence intended to yourself or Queene,like I said it was just my own opinion then please keep your opinion to yourself thank you he was polite, you are rude. |
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