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This takes place back then, when nursery rhymes Taught premature life-lessons, derived from the times And branching off of the lectures, I think it's time to unveil My own version of the classic, a ghetto nursery tale... So there's a story that's told about a boy who cried wolf He scared the villagers, the campers, the kids and adults He worried the masses, creating illusions of fear And with his lies, wounded the trust of those near and dear... Well he thought it was funny, to see the public alarm So he continued his cries, oblivious to the harm Yet each time that he chanted, pleaded, and cried The people grew weary, and tired of lies... Then one day, after countless times of pleading A real wolf comes around, no more misleading Snarling and hungry, primed and ready for eating And when the boy cried out, there was no one believing... The wolf got it's goods, and ate all that came And when it's path was crossed the result was the same If the boy would have known that trust isn't a game Then maybe just maybe there wouldn't be pain... Well...now for my story, though the last one is good It's a little outdated for those in the hood And not to be confused or misunderstood A new age tale would fit...well it should... You see, the boy in this story knew the power of trust But what's more, he also knew the devastation of lust Envy and greed, and the emotional toil they contain Powerful enough to make vows before GOD rearrange From ages of youth, infantile, he saw both mom and dad In happier times, basking in the love that they had Or at least shown, because the truth behind doors just won't He never knew that he'd be the one crying out "Don't..." Some time passes, and as all things change so does the vibe Different people start popping up, keeping feelings inside And just down low, because know one can see what is real The parents are growing apart, adultry's part of the deal... So the boy asks himself, "Pops who's this girl in the house?" "And how come every time she comes around, I got to get out?" "And hey mom, you're spending so much time with that guy..." Meanwhile he's being raised up in the streets, wondering why... And back at home, things start to take a shift for the worst Domestic violence ensues, eachday more dramatic than the first No other choice available but to bring the problems to heart And wonder if the joint of their seed caused this devious spark... "What could be happening? Why? Somebody show me the end... It wasn't always like this I know it, but it's becoming a trend... So many days, weeks, months that turn into years The disruption in this family giving reason for tears..." And then it happens. That rainy night, that the boy would love to forget... When his own wolf shows up, reminder of a scene he'd regret... And feel helpless in regards for the rest of his life... Because what happens next, eternal. Far removed from trite. He remembers it vividly, backseat of the whip for him With pops seat in the front empty, and the man stomping in tims Through the rain, heart broken devastated, demorilized with pain A choice given to the boy, "You can leave or stay..." But to leave would mean to go out into the storm with the man And leave the sense of confort that the female had planned At the time already dry in the whip, toasty and warm All the while five inches away, emotional holocaust reborn The man begs, pleads and cries, cause he just wants his kids But he's not in the state of mind to provide, doesn't show what it is That he needs to perform, to step up and create a place to exist And even though times have been tough, they've been no rougher than this So the boy has a choice, he can either stay or can leave But he has to choose soon because as each second proceeds The thief of time watches, and now the woman grabs hold of her keys It's now or never...never...the boy just sits back in his seat... And watches behind glass, his future fade past His father turned into a shell, and from there just get smashed Emotional...physical, throw in mental as well... Stripped from his seeds, his blood missing, obvious to tell And from there the story begins again, only this time with pain And no matter what the situation, where there's sadness there's rain A darkness in the boys heart, a chunk missing, love just not recieved... The tale of the boy who cried..."Daddy, don't leave..." |
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Yet another killer!
one of the ones that have to be heard from the poets lips to feel the full force of its power,depth and meaning? thumbs-up from england man! |
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Edited by
kc0003
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Mon 11/02/09 11:08 PM
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this scene plays out far too often.
great job laying it out and then following through with its end. |
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Wow, very well done.
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job well done about an all to common occurence.
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Yet another killer! one of the ones that have to be heard from the poets lips to feel the full force of its power,depth and meaning? thumbs-up from england man! If they start doing video posts on here, I'll definitely start plugging away at that! |
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this scene plays out far too often. great job laying it out and then following through with its end. That's the only way to really do it. Thanks for the kudos and support! |
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Wow, very well done. Miss Consonant coming through once again. Thank you! |
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job well done about an all to common occurence. True, so true, all the more reason to make sure it's addressed, you know? |
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