Help me out people what do you think.

Some more info about you

&

Post more pics of you

Sorry I have no more pics,camera got stolen,new computer

Welcome


Tammy

Welcome and I am with writergurl on this one. More info and pics would be nice.

Give me an example of more info.

Tell em what you like, dislike, what you are looking for in a girl...things you do in your spare time. You know stuff about you and what your looking for.

Oh, and hi and welcome!

i agree

hi and welcome

Ready? Here it goes!

First, Hi and Welcome!

When you are able, get new pix. The one you have now looks like a mug shot.

You do need more to your essay. Your essay is 'filler and pointless.

For example:



This screams, "I will waste your time". At least you are honest. You might want to consider rewriting that thought.



Oh boy. Um, fun doing what? Use one-word topics in the "Interest" section (the words in orange) and then expand on those topics in your essay.

Some may consider being "laid back" as lazy. Maybe reword that thought.



Almost every profile says this and not only is it filler but it's asinine. I am lead to believe that anyone who says "no drama" has been through it -- it still follows them -- and they know enough about drama for me to stay clear of them. Dump that statement.

Read other profiles to get an idea of what is palatable or appealing. After you read a few of both men’s' and women’s profiles, you will see the nauseating repeat phrases or the "yeah, right" statements that you will want to avoid.

Consider a new heading too. Saying "you never thought it would come to this" suggests you are embarrassed. There is nothing wrong with online datng and if you do it -- own it!

Oh, you would benefit from spell-check and grammar help.

Jump in the forums and have a ball!!

Your header "Never thought it would come to this" is a little depressing and my impression is that its saying that its bad to find care in another place beside a bar (a bit insulting for a lady trying to find the same in the same place):).And yes,you need to change the photo,although its you,its you seeming to hold a plaque below with the #'s 857464 Florida PD.No offence intended,just honest perspective or opinion,gl

Thank you MelodyGirl great info, you've helped alot,

Don't ya love her!!

I rush here whenever I see she posted

Melody and Lex should be official "Hows my Profile" advisors

That's why I really never give advice

They are always dead on!!

Well, you ain't chopped liver. I've read some pretty profound things you have read m'dear.

Profile has been changed.Thanks for the help everyone

I agree and it takes more than my opinion to create profile feedback. I always enjoy reading other people's suggestions too -- including your's and Gossipm!!

At least my comments were appreciated by Saturn. In the thread by greentractor guy, he ripped me a new one for giving him almost the same type of advice!

I don't understand being defensive when asking for help -- not hearing what you want to hear -- then blasting the analyst.

Saturn, I'm so glad you liked what everyone had to say!

LOVE IT!!

You have a sexy brain!

Hey guys,

I have removed a few posts here. When a member asks for constructive criticism, or help with their profile, then that is what this forum is for.

It is against our rules, to question the authenticity of another member on the forums or badger them in any way. You may offer helpful suggestions, in a polite and welcoming manner. *edit* as most of you all have.

Thanks,
Mark