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Hay can anyone help me with my profile and let me know if it sounds good or not.
Thank you for your help Diana |
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you should state what your looking for and wanting such in a relationship wise. also maybe mention your hobbies
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Spot on queene!
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profile good, distance from me too far
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Pics are good, list of interests is good. The actual text is way too sparse and doesn't say much about you. I'd lose the "long walks on the beach" line, as it's an overused cliche (is there such a thing as an underused cliche -- ?!). I'd also fix the spelling and punctuation, but I'm known to be a little anal about that stuff.
All in all, I think you've got a good start, it just needs more information about you and what you're looking for. Good luck!! |
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Hay can anyone help me with my profile and let me know if it sounds good or not. Thank you for your help Diana My impression is that you use too many consonants and not enough vowels. Also, a bit more generous use of invoking nature-scenes to introduce mood would help, as well as chiselling your text to work it to exude a warm glow. Otherwise very good. |
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