Topic: Liars and Cheaters (Revisited) | |
---|---|
The hardest part of any tale is the beginning
So allow me to retrace the steps and start this from the ending: Entwined in the embrace of a lover unfamiliar With the nightly indiscretions few would notice as peculiar Scarlet shades drawn shut Fighting back the light Yet while flames erupt Gasps encourage the life Shortened breaths Hastened pace Faster Harder Stronger Shrills Shouts And withdrawal Strokes subdued Substitute Switched and subsided Swift to surreal Selecting the latter Pacing the planting Of the lips The tongue The hands All systematic Decoding this rubix Cube in one hand Box in the other Pandora pulls in the subtle release Eyes roll forward to face And the pace And the pace And the pace Clothes replace Her face claims haste Not much time No need to waste Closing the door Back to the rain Within the car Checking the same Ol Things... The time The scene The surroundings Checking the same Ol Things... Condoms...check Mints...check Soap...check Leave no trace of lust or sin Always shower after the gym 10:45, still early... Not TOO early... Just earlier Reminiscing at a prior scene Another night... Another fling... (To be continued...) |
|
|
|
Skill,
remineds me of my all-time nas tune,Rewind! |
|
|
|
Thanks Ekko, I wanted the Rewind feel with the reverse story telling, but I also wanted to try something different with the conceptual portion. I'm going to weave this story into a series and really try to dive into the main concept.
|
|
|
|
Mr. Lover dang, that was nice...
|
|
|
|
Thanks Miss Consonant. Part two should be up soon...
|
|
|
|
anxious to get to the beginning...
|
|
|
|
what a great story told in reverse-left me wanting more
|
|
|
|
KC, part two should be up today...hope it's found to be fitting.
|
|
|
|
PKD, just putting the finishing touches on part two now...
|
|
|