Topic: Liars and Cheaters (Revisited)
LoversLyricist's photo
Tue 10/27/09 11:04 PM
The hardest part of any tale is the beginning
So allow me to retrace the steps and start this from the ending:

Entwined in the embrace of a lover unfamiliar
With the nightly indiscretions few would notice as peculiar
Scarlet shades drawn shut
Fighting back the light
Yet while flames erupt
Gasps encourage the life
Shortened breaths
Hastened pace
Faster
Harder
Stronger
Shrills
Shouts
And withdrawal
Strokes subdued
Substitute
Switched and subsided
Swift to surreal
Selecting the latter
Pacing the planting
Of the lips
The tongue
The hands
All systematic
Decoding this rubix
Cube in one hand
Box in the other
Pandora pulls in the subtle release
Eyes roll forward to face
And the pace
And the pace
And the pace
Clothes replace
Her face claims haste
Not much time
No need to waste
Closing the door
Back to the rain
Within the car
Checking the same
Ol
Things...
The time
The scene
The surroundings
Checking the same
Ol
Things...
Condoms...check
Mints...check
Soap...check
Leave no trace of lust or sin
Always shower after the gym
10:45, still early...
Not TOO early...
Just earlier
Reminiscing at a prior scene
Another night...
Another fling...

(To be continued...)

EkkoLost's photo
Wed 10/28/09 01:17 AM
Skill,
remineds me of my all-time nas tune,Rewind!

LoversLyricist's photo
Wed 10/28/09 06:09 AM
Thanks Ekko, I wanted the Rewind feel with the reverse story telling, but I also wanted to try something different with the conceptual portion. I'm going to weave this story into a series and really try to dive into the main concept.

MzEm's photo
Wed 10/28/09 11:00 AM
Mr. Lover dang, that was nice...

LoversLyricist's photo
Thu 10/29/09 03:32 AM
Thanks Miss Consonant. Part two should be up soon...

kc0003's photo
Thu 10/29/09 05:44 AM
anxious to get to the beginning...drinker

no photo
Thu 10/29/09 01:05 PM
what a great story told in reverse-left me wanting more

LoversLyricist's photo
Fri 10/30/09 08:09 AM
KC, part two should be up today...hope it's found to be fitting.

LoversLyricist's photo
Fri 10/30/09 08:10 AM
PKD, just putting the finishing touches on part two now...