Topic: Liars and cheaters
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Tue 10/27/09 06:34 AM
Edited by peladac on Tue 10/27/09 06:35 AM
Liars and cheaters
do you like what you do
do you think we are not keen
to catch on to you?

Your lies will be found
one way, shape or form
for I feel pity for you
your life must be torn

To play with one's heart
you find it a game
it is just wrong
for it's truly a shame

So go your own way
for being wanted, you are not
our hearts go to the honest
cause sooner or later, you get caught

The last laugh is on you
for you miss out on true love
something so wonderful
now that is something to think of.





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Tue 10/27/09 06:35 AM
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

Peccy's photo
Tue 10/27/09 06:44 AM
flowerforyou drinker drinker

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Tue 10/27/09 07:31 AM
oh Oprah, tis always the man that lies and cheats is it not.....sure

nice verbage, and such subtle language for such a horrendeous betrayal......nice

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Tue 10/27/09 07:48 AM
Thanks guys.

Huckleberry, I truly do not believe it's just men that lie and cheat. I have known some women that are just as despicable, and Oprah is wrong.:thumbsup:

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Tue 10/27/09 08:03 AM
One would have to be a complete idiot to think it's a one sided coin in such matters. I could write a book on the subject but I wouldn't want to face the persecution from both sides. But I'll start with a small audience:) Women are far better at it then men, they usually get caught because of guilt, men get caught because they're stupid and not very deceptive, that's the woman's forte....Ok, throw bricks now...ha ha

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Tue 10/27/09 08:49 AM

One would have to be a complete idiot to think it's a one sided coin in such matters. I could write a book on the subject but I wouldn't want to face the persecution from both sides. But I'll start with a small audience:) Women are far better at it then men, they usually get caught because of guilt, men get caught because they're stupid and not very deceptive, that's the woman's forte....Ok, throw bricks now...ha ha


Folds

Deception is but a fold
where smooth
belies her satin
reaching in between
the cool
feigns betrayal's intention.

Raine Les 10/27/2009

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Tue 10/27/09 08:51 AM
:heart: :heart: :heart:

smilingtearz's photo
Tue 10/27/09 02:59 PM
To true .. pen on girl flowerforyou great write with this smile2


I remember watching a tv show not sure which one it was but anyway
he had 2 wifes and later he had a truck crash both the wifes were informed and both came hospital how they tried seperate the both from sein him at same time, unfortunately that didn't work because he died
so both women and there kids had to be at the funeral . ( how would u be )lucky on his side guess he had no explaining to do lol.

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Tue 10/27/09 10:27 PM
Edited by LoversLyricist on Tue 10/27/09 10:30 PM
A great read, without a doubt. Very honest, very real. Nice. I often create by art of response and as such my next contribution will follow that premise...but with a twist...thanks for the inspiration.

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Tue 10/27/09 10:47 PM

Liars and cheaters
do you like what you do
do you think we are not keen
to catch on to you?

Your lies will be found
one way, shape or form
for I feel pity for you
your life must be torn

To play with one's heart
you find it a game
it is just wrong
for it's truly a shame

So go your own way
for being wanted, you are not
our hearts go to the honest
cause sooner or later, you get caught

The last laugh is on you
for you miss out on true love
something so wonderful
now that is something to think of.





:heart: flowerforyou Life will pass them bye, and they will miss its real meaning....:heart: nice write and I TO HATE:heart: ALL USER'S,,,,sorry just had to voice that here,wink,,,

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Wed 10/28/09 05:25 AM
Thanks, and this was geared toward ALL liars and cheaters, not one person. When something happens you tend to think of all the paths we have crossed. On here, I have encountered so many on here that have been deceitful. So the true liars and cheaters, one day you will be found out. I do have to say this, to those that are truthful, you have to understand why someone has so many questions or is leery as to who you really are. It's only human.

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Wed 10/28/09 07:15 AM
I have encountered so many on here that have been deceitful

^well that really sucks, and one day they will get their come uppance, but surely it hasn't stopped you from extending yourself?, thing is the next one in line always suffers from the previous jerk. What many of these idiots fail to realize is that sooner or later they will be found out, it doesn't erase the damage they've caused, but it always makes for an interesting confrontation:) That's when it's best to take them to a level they belong, pond scum.

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Wed 10/28/09 10:55 PM

Liars and cheaters
do you like what you do
do you think we are not keen
to catch on to you?

Your lies will be found
one way, shape or form
for I feel pity for you
your life must be torn

To play with one's heart
you find it a game
it is just wrong
for it's truly a shame

So go your own way
for being wanted, you are not
our hearts go to the honest
cause sooner or later, you get caught

The last laugh is on you
for you miss out on true love
something so wonderful
now that is something to think of.








nice write!! i like the way you finish up the piece!!drinker

nvkikigirl's photo
Wed 10/28/09 10:56 PM


One would have to be a complete idiot to think it's a one sided coin in such matters. I could write a book on the subject but I wouldn't want to face the persecution from both sides. But I'll start with a small audience:) Women are far better at it then men, they usually get caught because of guilt, men get caught because they're stupid and not very deceptive, that's the woman's forte....Ok, throw bricks now...ha ha


Folds

Deception is but a fold
where smooth
belies her satin
reaching in between
the cool
feigns betrayal's intention.

Raine Les 10/27/2009



wonderful as always!!! drinker

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Wed 10/28/09 11:04 PM


Liars and cheaters
do you like what you do
do you think we are not keen
to catch on to you?

Your lies will be found
one way, shape or form
for I feel pity for you
your life must be torn

To play with one's heart
you find it a game
it is just wrong
for it's truly a shame

So go your own way
for being wanted, you are not
our hearts go to the honest
cause sooner or later, you get caught

The last laugh is on you
for you miss out on true love
something so wonderful
now that is something to think of.








nice write!! i like the way you finish up the piece!!drinker


Aw thanks! Thanks to all and I hope you enjoyed it for I believe we have all encountered a liar or cheater in our lives. The last laugh IS on them. Have wonderful Thursday everyone.

carold's photo
Thu 10/29/09 08:03 AM
To bad frank is not here to read this:wink:

Good write girlie flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 10/29/09 01:40 PM

Liars and cheaters
do you like what you do
do you think we are not keen
to catch on to you?

Your lies will be found
one way, shape or form
for I feel pity for you
your life must be torn

To play with one's heart
you find it a game
it is just wrong
for it's truly a shame

So go your own way
for being wanted, you are not
our hearts go to the honest
cause sooner or later, you get caught

The last laugh is on you
for you miss out on true love
something so wonderful
now that is something to think of.





flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 10/29/09 01:42 PM
drinker I like this other side of you.drinker

Fusion99's photo
Fri 10/30/09 07:21 PM
Great writehappy bigsmile