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I once knew a girl And I called her friend We laughed for hours For days on end We ran in the rain And acted silly Oblivious to the Gradual diminishing Of our youth On day I kissed this girl And I called her lover A whole new world For us to discover We danced to the music In our heads And lived by the Rhythm in our hearts Acutely aware of The growing possibilities I took her hand And called her wife In the blink of an eye Two new lives We learned and we taught All of us, together She was our glue Our sun Our foundation And she never wavered Now the nest finds its self empty And we find ourselves older But, we are never alone Sometimes she can’t Remember my name But we laugh at the wrinkles Just the same I once new a girl And I called her friend I now know a life That without her Would end Sometimes I think about things As I lie awake at night And it always comes down to this I didn’t always make the right choices But, there is one I would never change I think about all the times we’ve had The times we ran and played The times we cried and fought The struggles we went through The good times The diapers and the sand The trips and the fevers Our nights alone on the couch, Thankful for the quiet Being pushed out of the bed By the three of them The cartoons and the pancakes The school plays and rushed dinners The chaos and the calm Coming home; to a home Yeah, I once knew a girl And I made her my life After all these years I still sleep peaceful For I know Without her Mine Would have been A life less Lived kc09 |
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dude...as a widower (tears flow)
this didn’t just touch me it rocked my entire soul f-ing beautiful wow!!! you amaze me |
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i have tears in my eyes as well..very beautiful!!
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dude...as a widower (tears flow) this didn’t just touch me it rocked my entire soul f-ing beautiful wow!!! you amaze me ha! thank you david the tears mean a lot to me...oh! sorry i hope to see you and the kids soon... |
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i have tears in my eyes as well..very beautiful!! thank you very much... and the tears?...well,they prove you are human... again, thank you |
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dude...as a widower (tears flow) this didn’t just touch me it rocked my entire soul f-ing beautiful wow!!! you amaze me ha! thank you david the tears mean a lot to me...oh! sorry i hope to see you and the kids soon... no need to be sorry this one just got to me and isn't that the point? |
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Though Ive never had this kind of life (or ever will) described here, I can see the joy and pain in it. Great Job {K}
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beautiful
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Wonderful, beautiful and of course it touched my heart.
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Always enjoy your writes,just beautiful
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Though Ive never had this kind of life (or ever will) described here, I can see the joy and pain in it. Great Job {K} well i don't think i will either my friend but, it doesn't stop us from seeing the picture, does it? thank you for stopping in |
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beautiful thank you.... |
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Wonderful, beautiful and of course it touched my heart. thank you M ... |
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Always enjoy your writes,just beautiful hi pam nice to see you... |
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dude...as a widower (tears flow) this didn’t just touch me it rocked my entire soul f-ing beautiful wow!!! you amaze me ha! thank you david the tears mean a lot to me...oh! sorry i hope to see you and the kids soon... no need to be sorry this one just got to me and isn't that the point? isn't that why you do it? |
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had to clean it up a bit...sorry
I once knew a girl And I called her friend We laughed for hours For days on end We ran in the rain And acted silly Oblivious to the Gradual diminishing Of our youth One day I kissed this girl And I called her lover A whole new world For us to discover We danced to the music In our heads And lived by the Rhythm in our hearts Acutely aware of The growing possibilities I took her hand And called her wife In the blink of an eye Two new lives We learned and we taught All of us, together She was our glue Our sun Our foundation And she never wavered Now the nest finds its self empty And we find ourselves older But, we are never alone Sometimes she can’t remember my name But we laugh at the wrinkles Just the same I once new a girl And I called her friend I now know a life that Without her, would end I think about things as I lie awake And it always comes down to this... I didn’t always make the right choices But, there is one I would never change I think about all the times we’ve had When we ran and played The times we cried and fought How we’ve grown Good times The struggles we went through Diapers and sand Trips and fevers Our nights alone on the couch, Thankful for the quiet Being pushed out of the bed By the three of them Cartoons and pancakes School plays and rushed dinners The chaos and the calm Coming home; to a home Yeah, I once knew a girl And I made her my life After all these years I still sleep peaceful For I know Without her Mine Would have been A life less Lived kc09 |
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Intense .... bittersweet ... the way you take us from the first Hello to the last goodbye...
I am speechless while a million emotions flood me. *sniff* Scenes from "The Notebook" fly past my mind's eye.. mixed in with my own life memories... *sniff* Once again a powerful & beautiful write {{{Kevin}}} |
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I work with people who would relay these types of stories to me about their loved ones from their lives of old, before they forgot who they or their loved ones were...
Beautiful and touching this... |
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Intense .... bittersweet ... the way you take us from the first Hello to the last goodbye... I am speechless while a million emotions flood me. *sniff* Scenes from "The Notebook" fly past my mind's eye.. mixed in with my own life memories... *sniff* Once again a powerful & beautiful write {{{Kevin}}} thank you for all of your kindness...im glad you found something to like in this... |
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I work with people who would relay these types of stories to me about their loved ones from their lives of old, before they forgot who they or their loved ones were... Beautiful and touching this... thank you for your reply...it must be hard to go through that. i feel for those that do... |
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