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Dark.
Shadows within the corner. Evil resides at home. Steady. Keep that pace. You don't want to be seen. Discard. A perfect piece of art. Beautifully broken inside. Pass. Look the other way. I only lead to disappointment. Chaos. Self-destruction in the first chapter. Two hearts that can't coincide. Hate. A fury for these memories. A crisis to my conscience. Need. To forget the existance of. Or, in our case, you. Broken. Dysfunctional frame of mind. Somethings can never be repaired. Infection. I think I need a cure. Before this sickness overtakes me. Pray. Despise the God among us. As he lives in disguise. Pain. Second nature to the lost. Dying to stray from this path. Believe. Down on broken knees; crying to the heavens. Save me from this tragedy. Bleed. At least then I know I'm alive. Down the road not across the street. Desire. Love and beauty in all I see. Withers and rots to my touch. Mute. I can speak yet have no voice. I can cry yet have no tears. Fallen. My dreams have sunk. Drowning in the sand. Adrenaline. Rest in peace. Live in terror. Moon. Today is tomorrow's memory. Tomorrow should have no sunrise. Eclipse. Two hearts are finally aligned. Why can't the darkness ever last? Hope. Unique like the snowflake. Varying between each soul. Crumble. Let the clouds part. Allow my light to finally shine. Break. To only know the rain. And never see the rainbow. Done. A book that shall never be read. Forgotten in the sands of yesterday. Bury. You may have forgiven me. But I can never forgive myself. Words. Never finding peace. Never finding closure. Speak. Sitting on the fence. Watching opportunity pass me by. Begin. Wanting something special. Constantly thinking I don't deserve it. Desolate. In my words... In my actions... Forever. To all the things in between. Will any ever hold meaning to me? |
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An incredible write Myke...Just wow...
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Edited by
BYondLife
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You like this?
Thanks.. Had a really.. crappy day. Needed to get my mind clear. |
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I use to have a pretty hectic mind but found writing helped...It is always good to get it all out of there, and it looks like you are doing it, and very well...
There is a light at the end of the tunnel, shining brightly for you, just keep on keeping on, and keep telling yourself that you are 'a one of a kind awesome individual'...Make sure you believe in you always... Oh and by the way, I lost my game at Texas Holdem Poker as I got caught up reading this write, and the game folded on me...I had a good hand too... |
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Tue 10/20/09 08:06 PM
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wow! an awesome write...so much great in this...
one of my faves: "I can speak yet have no voice. I can cry yet have no tears." |
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I use to have a pretty hectic mind but found writing helped...It is always good to get it all out of there, and it looks like you are doing it, and very well... There is a light at the end of the tunnel, shining brightly for you, just keep on keeping on, and keep telling yourself that you are 'a one of a kind awesome individual'...Make sure you believe in you always... Oh and by the way, I lost my game at Texas Holdem Poker as I got caught up reading this write, and the game folded on me...I had a good hand too... Thanks.. I'm trying. Failing.. but I'm a work in progress so to speak, lol. Sorry about your game. =( Didn't mean to distract you. |
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wow! an awesome write...so much great in this... one of my faves: "I can speak yet have no voice. I can cry yet have no tears." Don't ask me why.. But I thought of you when I wrote that particular line.. Well, actually truth is.. After I was re-reading it.. Not during the intial process.. Well, anyway.. I'm glad you liked it.. |
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I use to have a pretty hectic mind but found writing helped...It is always good to get it all out of there, and it looks like you are doing it, and very well... There is a light at the end of the tunnel, shining brightly for you, just keep on keeping on, and keep telling yourself that you are 'a one of a kind awesome individual'...Make sure you believe in you always... Oh and by the way, I lost my game at Texas Holdem Poker as I got caught up reading this write, and the game folded on me...I had a good hand too... Thanks.. I'm trying. Failing.. but I'm a work in progress so to speak, lol. Sorry about your game. =( Didn't mean to distract you. Never look at it as 'failing', only as learning, and all good works in progress take time... |
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I use to have a pretty hectic mind but found writing helped...It is always good to get it all out of there, and it looks like you are doing it, and very well... There is a light at the end of the tunnel, shining brightly for you, just keep on keeping on, and keep telling yourself that you are 'a one of a kind awesome individual'...Make sure you believe in you always... Oh and by the way, I lost my game at Texas Holdem Poker as I got caught up reading this write, and the game folded on me...I had a good hand too... Thanks.. I'm trying. Failing.. but I'm a work in progress so to speak, lol. Sorry about your game. =( Didn't mean to distract you. Never look at it as 'failing', only as learning, and all good works in progress take time... The 'Believe in yourself' ..that's what I'm failing at. I can't even convince myself that past ten mins.. Daily occurances are only making it worse.. |
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I use to have a pretty hectic mind but found writing helped...It is always good to get it all out of there, and it looks like you are doing it, and very well... There is a light at the end of the tunnel, shining brightly for you, just keep on keeping on, and keep telling yourself that you are 'a one of a kind awesome individual'...Make sure you believe in you always... Oh and by the way, I lost my game at Texas Holdem Poker as I got caught up reading this write, and the game folded on me...I had a good hand too... Thanks.. I'm trying. Failing.. but I'm a work in progress so to speak, lol. Sorry about your game. =( Didn't mean to distract you. Never look at it as 'failing', only as learning, and all good works in progress take time... The 'Believe in yourself' ..that's what I'm failing at. I can't even convince myself that past ten mins.. Daily occurances are only making it worse.. Remember to own only the stuff that is yours...Sometimes we take in and take on so much crap, that isn't and wasn't ours to begin with...It will free up space in your mind, to be filled with all the good things...Don't stress or sweat the small stuff, and hey, none of us are ever perfect, and none of us never have no baggage, we just need to know how to let go and unpack and try and live for the moment...When we clutter our minds with what if's, and maybes, we just go round in ever increasing circles... Just from reading your writes, I believe in you, I see it all there in your writings, even if you don't or can't...If you ever need to vent, send me a message anytime...Don't let the world get to you, just get yourself into the world...Take care... |
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i did like this piece. your writing is really well done .....
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Ainjel..
There you go again. =] I'm starting to think you like me. Always being so prophetic n stuff wif me... Wanting me to believe in myself.. I've never had/felt such.. Outside confidence before.. It's refreshing. |
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i did like this piece. your writing is really well done ..... Thanx Kiki. I you more though. |
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Edited by
Ainjel
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Tue 10/20/09 09:41 PM
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Ainjel.. There you go again. =] I'm starting to think you like me. Always being so prophetic n stuff wif me... Wanting me to believe in myself.. I've never had/felt such.. Outside confidence before.. It's refreshing. I have always believed in the "sometimes a stranger comes into your life to light the way for you"...I guess I'm the stranger...lol... Oh and hey, that post by the dieselbandit in this section, with the Record Company, you could always offer him some of your writes, after all, alot of Record Companies find talented singers, but they also need talented song writers to keep their talented singers going... That post has gone now...It might be somewhere else on Mingle...But I remembered his email addy... leogallant2008@hotmail.com Oh and edited because it was... |
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Ainjel.. There you go again. =] I'm starting to think you like me. Always being so prophetic n stuff wif me... Wanting me to believe in myself.. I've never had/felt such.. Outside confidence before.. It's refreshing. I have always believed in the "sometimes a stranger comes into your life to light the way for you"...I guess I'm the stranger...lol... Oh and hey, that post by the dieselbandit in this section, with the Record Company, you could always offer him some of your writes, after all, alot of Record Companies find talented singers, but they also need talented song writers to keep their talented singers going... That post has gone now...It might be somewhere else on Mingle...But I remembered his email addy... leogallant2008@hotmail.com Oh and edited because it was... Thanks for the notion.. I'd love to speak with him.. But I have no self esteem.. I'd go to start writing.. ..and there'd be nothing. I'd cancel it out and it'd never happen.. Now if he wrote me.. i'd open up like a can of sardines.. but.. I hate rejection.. ..and that's what I'd expect. |
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