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While deciding to devote this specific contribution
To the art of dedication And the craft of reproducing Or rather the reproduction When debating the construction Of a lyrical seduction Relying on the minds deduction Well deducing Mr. Watson Watching singles play there prose Positioning themselves to mingle To and from is how it goes So instead of strictly drafting The challenge here is more in crafting For while the intro may have happened Continuation leads to tacking On a couple lines in hurry To make the owner of this story More than the one that called a start Yet rather all who those who took a part... (My experiment is to challenge a continuation reply to all those who take the time to read this piece, run with it, and have fun...) |
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In the glory of the moment
Unto thee we cast atonement Of the writer of these words Who never asked to be famous But who is and don't blame us Because we listen to his lyrics And become a little hysteric |
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very nice....welcome to the site and the forum....
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And even with hysteric tendencies
The The plight surrounding Italy Is similar in estimates And more than just a kin you see While missing consonant Both welcomes to the site and scene It's both a pleasure and a challenge To continue with this thing... |
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And even with hysteric tendencies
The The plight surrounding Italy Is similar in estimates And more than just a kin you see While missing consonant Both welcomes to the site and scene It's both a pleasure and a challenge To continue with this thing... Upon first thought I was elated To try and continue what you created Then I realized that art has but one artist Your words are powerful, it is impossible to continue this So in my futile efforts of trying to mimic your mastery I leave an abstract poem that possesses secrets of me The stroke of pen, like the painters brush, I craft thoughts in colorful hues Reds, yellows, and various shades of blue For there is love and light Sadness and strife So welcome LoversLyricist to Poems and Creative writing, Now, whose next to try and continue this thing? |
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Edited by
Moviemadness
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Mon 10/19/09 05:29 PM
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continue this i must
it's a test of ones creativity if i don't press on i will bust a beautiful work of longevity for many minds to mold together a poem never ending floating like a feather down a hole it keeps descending never to find a resting place everyone watches it pass with a look of awe on their face at what we have done to creat this mass |
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While definite, the awe I feel
It's only kin the works reveal And then conceal The shades and hues The scarlet reds And azul blues Or rhythmic blues If timing true For what Once lost Is found Anew Recant the vibe For those who do... Persist, pursue And fight on to Continue... |
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