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An abstract concept
A profound devotion The diversity in the answers The complexity of the meanings A difficult passion One that bares no explanation Unsurmountable questions Answers that leave you wanting Using one word to encapsulate Defined or refinsed Trust me, it means so much more Then what he proclaims it to be Envision the silence Growing numb in the loneliness A void is filled with reason Though far-stretched as it may seem to be Not only is a dream born But an undefined resolve This, this is my purpose While differences are conceptualized Proving it has no universal definition Love is still spelled the same way Yet so is hatred Memories of futility The regrets are in bold print Ever so lost in the remembrance Attempts to calculate what went so wrong On the outside I still peer inward Isn't that supposed to be my life? Traveling so long for a promised place Only to arrive and find nothing Empty, abandoned, desolate So many words to describe one thing A thing that should never have to be defined I used to sit by idly Watching the world move Waiting forever for a sign Immune to the destruction about me No longer will I follow you Down these roads of repeativeness All you lead me into is sorrow I must find a new path One that leads me away from you... |
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good emotion...
good ending... well done ![]() |
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How in the sweet name of Mary..
Did you read and reply so frikkin fast?! I just posted it! lol Thanx tho, none-the-less.. ..and hey.. I was doing some backtrailing, cuz yeah I'm new and all.. ..but I know your not and I was interested in reading some more of yours.. Well, that one string had a bunch in it.. I really admire/respect/and like your work. I was going to respond but it was like 980 pages long.. ..and I'm getting tired; finally.. One day, maybe I'll get to catch up on the ones you have around here. I hope to see more of your own in the near future.. |
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Now THAT is remarkable writing!
Very well expressed --so many things Im sure everyone has felt. Welcome- its good to have you here.. |
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Nice write
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Now THAT is remarkable writing! Very well expressed --so many things Im sure everyone has felt. Welcome- its good to have you here.. Thanx it's good to feel welcomed, anywhere, let alone here. :] Hey Kim, thanx for the 2nd rose. :] I'm now aiming to get a dozen from you. XD |
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