Topic: You hold my hand...
sulfuricacidtone's photo
Fri 10/09/09 04:51 PM
Yeah I jinxed myself in writing this awhile ago, but I just felt like posting this up so some of you guys can read it.



You hold my hand and I look into your eyes
Picturing the moment when I lose your love I surely will break down and start with my cries
Knowing this I would like to show you the ways
How I spend every waking moment thinking of the past days
When we first met, when we first kissed I felt accompished
I want to tell you that you are one of my best friends
Hoping our love and friendship won't ever end
I need you in my life because you my heart and soul
When your with me I feel complete and whole
I really wouldn't know what to do if I lose you
Because your my life, my love, and my break through
Every waking moment your not with me
I wish you were because I know we are meant to be
My love for you won't ever die
Because your the one for me in my eyes.

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 10/09/09 04:55 PM
awww I hate those jinxes :wink:

Welcome to the poetry forums flowerforyou

sulfuricacidtone's photo
Fri 10/09/09 04:56 PM
Awe thank you =]

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Fri 10/09/09 04:59 PM
Really sucks when that happens, but it is coincidence...not a jinx....nice write...keep it up.flowerforyou