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Topic: Only You [A song i wrote]
Rawrr_Girl Joined Sun 10/04/09 Posts: 4431	Fri 10/09/09 11:42 AM
Here i am, all alone. In my bedroom. Now you're gone, all i see is tear's. I keep crying since you left. In my tear's i drown. I may never see you again. Will you ever learn to come back to me? Only you can dry my tear's. Only you can make me smile. Only you can make me feel better. Only you can take me home. When i'm not strong, i rely on you. I've had another bad day. Cannot concentrate on my work. I still think of contacting you. Then i think "Is it really worth it?". You may not care. So i might aswell leave it. Will you ever learn to come back to me? Only you can dry my tear's. Only you can make me smile. Only you can make me feel better. Only you can take me home. When i'm not strong, i rely on you.

Itguy70 Joined Tue 10/06/09 Posts: 24	Fri 10/09/09 12:05 PM
WOW are you missing someone?

richojb Joined Sun 04/12/09 Posts: 2	Fri 10/09/09 12:08 PM
nice

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 10/09/09 12:17 PM


somethingspecial33 Joined Tue 10/06/09 Posts: 57	Fri 10/09/09 01:50 PM
Here i am, all alone. In my bedroom. Now you're gone, all i see is tear's. I keep crying since you left. In my tear's i drown. I may never see you again. Will you ever learn to come back to me? Only you can dry my tear's. Only you can make me smile. Only you can make me feel better. Only you can take me home. When i'm not strong, i rely on you. I've had another bad day. Cannot concentrate on my work. I still think of contacting you. Then i think "Is it really worth it?". You may not care. So i might aswell leave it. Will you ever learn to come back to me? Only you can dry my tear's. Only you can make me smile. Only you can make me feel better. Only you can take me home. When i'm not strong, i rely on you. I love your song/poem! Nothing hurts worse than letting go.

kalunda Joined Fri 06/19/09 Posts: 284	Fri 10/09/09 06:51 PM


Rawrr_Girl Joined Sun 10/04/09 Posts: 4431	Sat 10/10/09 03:06 PM
Awww guys, thanx so much! Didn't think any1 wud bother readin it. it means a lot, as a put my heart and soul into writin. Thats gr8 :). Thank u all. xxxx

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sat 10/10/09 03:14 PM
That's great girl ... do you have the audio on the web anywhere we could listen to it? Welcome to the site

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 10/10/09 03:16 PM
what she said...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 10/11/09 05:43 PM
what he agreed to ^ welcome...

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