Feathers fly all around
I never wanted this
Shaggy waves on the ground
Lilac scented piss

Red pillows mangled strange
Green diamonds scream
I wouldn't dare make a change
It's in my head it seems

Glorious denial takes my enemy
It's my other side
You will never understand me!!
Oh! the smiles I hide

Sun leaks through white metal
Industrial gardens roar
Yellow fake sun flower pedal
Growing on the door

Fun house mirrors take my sight
warming up my head
This is crazy am I RIGHT?!
laughter fills my bed

Fiber glass fills my lungs
Where are my pills?!
Little holes restrain my tongue
The thrill oh the thrill of kills!

A chapter coming true
It's all in my head
I cannot stay blue
I would rather be red.

It's a bit wild maybe I could translate.
It's a view of my own hell.

its interesting how vivid you can describe it...I like

A writer even likes your stuff!

How amazing!

And not my stuff!

Even more amazing!

AWESOMEE!

IM NOT JEALOUS!

lol jk its all a joke

your writing style is VERY unique and it's pretty much how i like to write.

RIGHT!?!?!?!

i forgot to tell you its AMAZZZZZZZZZIIIINGGG!!!!

diction, theme, everything!!!

COMMENT FIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol you make me smile Dhalian

and thank you very much Kalunda

Awesome

Thank you Jimz!

Good stuff! I like reading it many times over...an exciting and thrilling ride...

I appreciate it AZ!!
Very much.

quite a visual piece...aptly colorful as well

and "red" is the perfect end...well done..

Thanks Kc very much and yes I loved the ending as well