Why does it seem to come around
every time you put me down?
You say i'm not your little toy
to make me warm to fill me with joy
hope and passion at my feet
to you my lips are oh so sweet
but why is it when i come around
you always seem to put me down?
your sick games play with my head
a dark reality i wish was dead
you make it seem as if i am not
able to find the tie to my knot
you make me think you're the only one
but here i am to say we're done
done playing a fool
and swimming in your emotional pool
you use me for pleasure in the wrongest way
maybe its time to find a brighter day
i found the one you told me i wouldn't
you kept me a while but in the end you couldn't
i laugh at you and your pretend fantasy
cause its now i realize you weren't the man for me.


:)
i tried

Like Maya Angelou said ... "When you know better, you do better"


Nice ... welcome to the poetry forums kelli

lol i didnt mean to report your post, kelli.

The poem was lovely and sincere.

I HATED IT!! lol jk jk

I dunno why you dont write more.

You should.

Its a good way to vent emotions.

Which you do well.

Thank you very much art gurl i love Maya Angelou


i love you ashley :)

i didnt see the bottom line.

so i was like GASP!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

but EVERYTHING will be ALRIGHT!!

lol

the end

<3

Very nice

Like !

Beautifull , Really well put across.

Poems dealt with such feeling of emotion are always intense.
Enables you to see that person from inside more clearly.

Got to say one of which I've came by I really like .


Best wishes;-)

Nice! Welcome...

I believe you succeeded with the write and the experience, nicely done.

ah, a little emotional blood letting...
nicely done...glad to see you show restraint
and not go over the top. (i have that prob sometimes)

Thank you everyone!!!

It is true, writing often opens the door to healing. This is really a good piece.