When I startled
myself to sleep,
When I tried
to climb
out of that sludge
Almost waist deep

When I tried.....
Yes.......that was the......

Only a dream,
Those were the
only times,
When I scalded
my insides with a scream

What was hidden there?
What had been walled?

Just a run through,
Just a draft,
Just something there,
to rip apart,
suddenly smash
the pieces never

Leave,
and you never Leaf

Suck in that same
old hole,
not even sure
Which one's your
right way to go.

Well.....I'm here,
All smiles and wide awake:

"I remember a fear, I remember
digging around for it in a waist-deep foul lake."

This is awesome! Love it, love it

Goodness my friend I am diggin' this write...thanks for sharing your talent...

Thanks Art and MzEm

"When I tried.....
Yes.......that was the...... "

spoken so well, thank you.

"scalded my insides with a scream" most awesome line, nicely done, Sir Fusion

[sharris] Hey, long time no see Thanky you for responding

[different]Thanks different, really appreciate it

Nice!!

nicely done (B)

i remember that lake
and the foul
intestinal odor
i remember how the stench
lingered
for years
and how, so many years later
only i know the source
of its birth...



peace to you...

Thanks kc003, is this add one of yours? very cool!

Dream A Scape

Someone I know
she says with quiet, discreet.
I think she lives
just down the street.
Do you think she can see
just how this is?
I feel you could help her
It is what I believe.
Stuck for so long
under the mud nearly crusted.
Unable to claw her way,
no one to be trusted.
Tired and weary
she just sits and stares.
Cannot even sort
between breathing and fears.
Someone I know
Wanting to scream.
I think she's just realized
this is not her best dream.

Raine Les 10/6/2009

Wow, I've been missing out, this the first poem I read of yours, awesome

Thank you sharris, this is a powerful and awesome poem

Thanks dude, there's many more on here, check em out