Silk running all the way down to her feet,
Hair flowing all around her back,
Her eyes piercing my gaze,
The sound of her voice that I hear.

She walks with grace along the clouds,
Flying through my mind all of the time,

Softly she speaks to me,
Lashing out with a venomous tongue,
What once I loved I now despise,
This will be my only love story.

She walks with grace along the clouds,
Flying through my mind all of the time,

Even in leaving she flooded my thoughts,
Regretting decisions made that I could not change,
Proving that love is more deadly then peaceful,
Forever I miss her starry eyes beaming at me.

She walks with grace along the clouds,
Flying through my mind all of the time,

I guess this would be goodbye.

Beautiful write {{{Fear}}}

Thank you (((MsTeddy))).

Bravooooooooooooooo,, I fully Enjoy the opportunity to view your soul...

I enjoy sharing what I have left of it.

Well done:thumbsup Sometimes the line between love and hate seems very thin.

Loved it Love can lift one higher then the moon then at times make them feel as if they have been buried alive......

Great Write Fear and Loathing

Excellent Hook!

nice write...

I almost ended up ditching the hook, but decided that it fell together pretty nicely regardless of the shift in the write.

Thank you everyone, all of your comments are much appreciated.

that was beautiful fear, made me feel it too.... there is plenty of soul left in you.

Thank you, at the very least a lot of writing.