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whats everyone think of my profile? no one likes me. wats the problem w me?
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Maybe if the words were typed out and not in text mode. Other than that, don't see too much wrong.
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Um, use complete sentences? If you take the time and energy to create a profile that truly reflects who you are, readers will see that.
Not dat. |
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I agree with lilith. And your name sounds too much like an infamous knife weilder. Does Lorena ring a bell?
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Edited by
MelodyGirl
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Wed 09/09/09 10:35 AM
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Um, use complete sentences? If you take the time and energy to create a profile that truly reflects who you are, readers will see that. Not dat. I agree with Lilith! Your headline and the entire essay of your profile are embarrassing in terms of content and grammar. I wish everyone who wanted feedback on their profiles would read past threads of others who have posted because the feedback is the same: Your profile is your marketing tool. You are the product looking for something specific. If you don't market yourself well, you will get zero results. With the hundreds of profiles on Mingle, how will yours stand out from the others -- in a GOOD way? And, your username is a little scary with the Lorena Bobbitt reference! Best wishes |
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Maybe if the words were typed out and not in text mode. Other than that, don't see too much wrong. ditto |
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well i see cleavage.....what's not to like?
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CANT SEEM TO CHANGE THE STUPID MADE UP NAME MY SISTER PUT ON HERE FOR FUN. MY SISTER ALSO SAID I SHOULDNT USE BAD GRAMMER. LESSON LEARNED!!!!
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The profile looks fine but I'd retype it without capslock. All capitals is usually seen as shouting online.
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MelodyGirl:
Mingle2 is not about a literary dissertation. There are no "points deducted" for abbreviations, slang, or street lingo. I seem to remember that the mantra on your Mingle2 profile is "Guys with tattoos are hot!!". That expression does not seem to convey intelligence, if that was your desire. The stumbling block that she may be encountering stems from what I perceive as "warning signs" to potential suitors. I get the impression that she has been burned in the past. In her profile, she seems to be telling potential beaus that she will not tolerate any games from "players". Guys do not wish to see a profile with WARNING SIGNS. Insert friendlier dialogue, letting men know that you are a strong, passionate, independent woman. That should do the trick. |
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MelodyGirl: Mingle2 is not about a literary dissertation. There are no "points deducted" for abbreviations, slang, or street lingo. I seem to remember that the mantra on your Mingle2 profile is "Guys with tattoos are hot!!". That expression does not seem to convey intelligence, if that was your desire. The stumbling block that she may be encountering stems from what I perceive as "warning signs" to potential suitors. I get the impression that she has been burned in the past. In her profile, she seems to be telling potential beaus that she will not tolerate any games from "players". Guys do not wish to see a profile with WARNING SIGNS. Insert friendlier dialogue, letting men know that you are a strong, passionate, independent woman. That should do the trick. Wow, you seem to always comment on my replies among the many others posted in this thread and the thread regarding your profile. You are so irritating! It's obvious we don't see eye to eye on many things; consequently, just ignore my posts -- please and thank you. I never said mine was perfect, nor did I ask for feedback. And, my statement is succinct and descriptive: Tattooed boys with toys ARE hot! |
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dude, MG is HOT!!!
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dude, MG is HOT!!! and you are always a gentleman! A gentleman who like boobies!! |
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dude, MG is HOT!!! and you are always a gentleman! A gentleman who like boobies!! well what can i say,i have good taste |
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