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Edited by
kc0003
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Wed 09/02/09 01:18 AM
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as the rain outside begins to fade
the sun peaks out around the shade iris dance in the winds of may now it’s early june and the lilies play out of the shade... and i’m all alone in the garden we planned watching the soil we groomed turn to sand weeds choking out every breath i take another lesson at the hands of fate in the hands of fate... darkness falls - on me through it all - i see your pretty face and i’m gonna try... not to miss you so i call out your name but, it's all in vein i tried to love you and it’s just the same watch my world go from light to dark too many olds to make a new start it's just the same darkness falls - on me close my eyes – i see your pretty face and i’m gonna try... not to miss you your face your taste your grace your embrace your smile your touch your voice your love darkness falls – on me open my eyes – i see i can’t deny that i miss you kc09 |
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wow, that was nice
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thank you.....
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thank you too....
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Well written ((((Kace))))
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Beautiful, just beautiful....
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Enjoyed that
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thank you... |
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Well written ((((Kace)))) yeah well, i try..... |
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Beautiful, just beautiful.... thank you...nice of you to say |
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very well done kc003!
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Enjoyed that thank you for that |
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very well done kc003! thank you kindly.... |
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enjoyed,beautiful
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enjoyed,beautiful awwwwww thank you...... |
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nice write...again
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nice write...again ehhh...thanks my friend |
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Very nice KC,
It kind of hit close to home for me. |
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