Topic: noone should die alone(the greatful spirit) | |
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i see a crowd gather looking at the ground
a young woman has been shot and robbed they offer no comfort,just look around so i go and hold her as she sobs, shes bleeding bad, breathing in sighs and her blood now covers me, she wont be alone when she dies, i'll give her comfort until she's free, with a shuddering gasp she looks up at me greatful for my compassionate heart, and in her eyes i can see that it's time for her to depart, i hold her close and give my love, to a girl i do not know, noone should ever die alone and to her thats what i show, as i feel her slip away, from the corner of my eye i see, the spirit of her inner child, waving and smiling at me, she slowly starts to drift away the tears flood from my eyes, just her way of saying thank you, before her spirit flies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully powerful! Thank you! ![]() |
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Beautiful and sad
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WOW! What heartfelt, emotional (wonderful) writing-
Makes me feel like I was there to observe that act of selflessness. BRAVO!! |
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WOW! What heartfelt, emotional (wonderful) writing- Makes me feel like I was there to observe that act of selflessness. BRAVO!! ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully powerful! Thank you! ![]() ![]() |
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Beautiful and sad ![]() ![]() |
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nice..I love a good write filled with compassion.
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nice..I love a good write filled with compassion. ![]() |
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you have such a talent. It was like I was there... truly one of your best writes.
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you have such a talent. It was like I was there... truly one of your best writes. ![]() |
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