Topic: Wishing Well
writer_gurl's photo
Mon 08/31/09 11:28 AM
Once I wished on a wishing well
To take me away
from my own hell
and for my darkness to become bright as day

They see nothing
Just a pretty face
How can I be something
When empty compliments they make

Like a porcelain doll
to be stared at
The fake smiles will not fall
as they comment this and that

Lovely eyes
Beautiful smile
Body so lithe
only for a little while

All I wish for is someone real
not to treat me like a fragile doll
All I wish is for time to heal
and to know that I am not just a thing at all

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 08/31/09 12:33 PM

Once I wished on a wishing well
To take me away
from my own hell
and for my darkness to become bright as day

They see nothing
Just a pretty face
How can I be something
When empty compliments they make

Like a porcelain doll
to be stared at
The fake smiles will not fall
as they comment this and that

Lovely eyes
Beautiful smile
Body so lithe
only for a little while

All I wish for is someone real
not to treat me like a fragile doll
All I wish is for time to heal
and to know that I am not just a thing at all

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Fusion99's photo
Mon 08/31/09 01:18 PM
Nice write!flowerforyou flowerforyou

kalunda's photo
Mon 08/31/09 01:46 PM
fragile maybe...while darkness sways...
healing will come...with the suns warm rays.

pretty? for sure...but your real beauty's inside,
with healing you'll glow with a light you can't hide.

already...you're shining inspiration for me...
soon... you'll be shining...for the whole world to see.

no photo
Mon 08/31/09 01:53 PM
{{{w_g}}}:wink: flowers

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 08/31/09 02:53 PM
The you inside you, shines through your writes flowers

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 08/31/09 02:56 PM
And some day you shall find one that sees the true you...bigsmile

bedlum1's photo
Mon 08/31/09 04:27 PM

Once I wished on a wishing well
To take me away
from my own hell
and for my darkness to become bright as day

They see nothing
Just a pretty face
How can I be something
When empty compliments they make

Like a porcelain doll
to be stared at
The fake smiles will not fall
as they comment this and that

Lovely eyes
Beautiful smile
Body so lithe
only for a little while

All I wish for is someone real
not to treat me like a fragile doll
All I wish is for time to heal
and to know that I am not just a thing at all

to be treated like an intelligent human being what a great idea..to bad most of the world is shallow and addicted to pettieness.....lol ...i get u..nice write