Topic: Ripped AND Torn
purplecat's photo
Fri 05/25/07 08:34 PM




................Ripped and Torn ............



my eyes are open , but I am not awake , I cannot see , its like my eyes
did break ,
shattered dreams ,,torn apart , ripped my visions , ........ they where
doomed from the start .
blurry it is yet crystal clear , I can still feel it , stifling fear ,
cannot see it , it wont disapear.
while everything else might fade from sight , still no way to escape the
fright.

My ears ,,,, hey cannot hear,, the softened voice , it has become quiet
, not by choice ,

deafened by my lonely cries ,.................
OH!!!!!!! HOW LOVE I DO DESPISE !!!!!!!!!!!

My flesh is cold ,,, the pulse has lost its will ,,, feels like deaths
grip ,,,,,,,,,,,
I"m wrapped in a chill ...
I've lost my edge , feel no thrill , all has turned ,,,,,,,,very still.

.hide the pain ,...... feel the emotional drain,, .. I wear it like a
stain
.Its bound on my throat , like a heavy chain ...........
Its clutching my heart , and making my face rain ,
love is lost with nothing left to gain.
its hard to breath ...............
I think I've been slain.

purplecat's photo
Fri 05/25/07 09:46 PM
gee...........



........... thats sad Purple Cat ..

glasses

bibby7's photo
Fri 05/25/07 09:49 PM
It is, indeed, very sad Purple Cat...flowerforyou drinker

eileena9's photo
Fri 05/25/07 10:10 PM
Sad but good, flowerforyou flowerforyou

bibby7's photo
Fri 05/25/07 10:13 PM
Well written, of course..But , it is sad that these emotions haunt
her..flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 05/25/07 11:16 PM
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{ purple }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
flowerforyou :cry: flowerforyou

Fanta46's photo
Fri 05/25/07 11:22 PM
Deep, purple and sad!!flowerforyou flowerforyou