Topic: The Fog..by Night
AZKait's photo
Sun 08/30/09 05:14 PM
The fog sets in...I step out onto the patio to immerse in it, naked.

White, dark, glimmering blanket draping over me, warm yet cold...shivering, trembling.

I breathe deep and slow, sucking in the damp morning clouded-over air, whetting my tensed lungs...and lips.

Bathing...as intended by goddesses that be...

Eyes close halfway, as dew begins to collect on my lashes as on petals cloaked in the night...

I am most alive...at this moment, my skin…awake.

My soul...departs...to out-of-body places.

While my body remains...in static, electrified...state...and waits.

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 08/30/09 08:31 PM

The fog sets in...I step out onto the patio to immerse in it, naked.

White, dark, glimmering blanket draping over me, warm yet cold...shivering, trembling.

I breathe deep and slow, sucking in the damp morning clouded-over air, whetting my tensed lungs...and lips.

Bathing...as intended by goddesses that be...

Eyes close halfway, as dew begins to collect on my lashes as on petals cloaked in the night...

I am most alive...at this moment, my skin…awake.

My soul...departs...to out-of-body places.

While my body remains...in static, electrified...state...and waits.

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 08/31/09 03:08 PM
flowerforyou

AZKait's photo
Tue 09/01/09 04:42 PM
flowerforyou
Thank you Mirror and MsTeddy, kindness is a drug for me!
:heart: :heart: :heart:

mig25's photo
Tue 09/01/09 09:50 PM
This piece is so soft; subtle. I could see your words, feel them; this piece is truly beautiful.

AZKait's photo
Thu 01/10/13 08:50 PM
Ah, I do remember this, thank you!

no photo
Thu 01/10/13 09:00 PM
Edited by KiK2me on Thu 01/10/13 09:01 PM
I got stuck on the "Naked" part....
hehehe
:wink:
good write Ms...


AZKait's photo
Thu 01/10/13 09:09 PM
Thank you much sir! :)