Topic: The Fog..by Night | |
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The fog sets in...I step out onto the patio to immerse in it, naked.
White, dark, glimmering blanket draping over me, warm yet cold...shivering, trembling. I breathe deep and slow, sucking in the damp morning clouded-over air, whetting my tensed lungs...and lips. Bathing...as intended by goddesses that be... Eyes close halfway, as dew begins to collect on my lashes as on petals cloaked in the night... I am most alive...at this moment, my skin…awake. My soul...departs...to out-of-body places. While my body remains...in static, electrified...state...and waits. |
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The fog sets in...I step out onto the patio to immerse in it, naked. White, dark, glimmering blanket draping over me, warm yet cold...shivering, trembling. I breathe deep and slow, sucking in the damp morning clouded-over air, whetting my tensed lungs...and lips. Bathing...as intended by goddesses that be... Eyes close halfway, as dew begins to collect on my lashes as on petals cloaked in the night... I am most alive...at this moment, my skin…awake. My soul...departs...to out-of-body places. While my body remains...in static, electrified...state...and waits. |
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Thank you Mirror and MsTeddy, kindness is a drug for me! |
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This piece is so soft; subtle. I could see your words, feel them; this piece is truly beautiful.
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Ah, I do remember this, thank you!
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Edited by
KiK2me
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Thu 01/10/13 09:01 PM
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I got stuck on the "Naked" part....
hehehe good write Ms... |
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Thank you much sir! :)
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