Topic: Running out of hope...
che_'s photo
Sun 08/30/09 03:15 PM
I'm feeling so much sorrow
I can't even say just why
Maybe it's the weather
Or it could just be my life...

The path that I have chosen
Along this journey mine
feel's like life has passed me by
And I'm running out of time

I know I've been alot depressed
How could I not be?
The choices which I have taken
Have been wrought with responsibilities

Suddenly my life seems over
The years they flew right past
The kids' now almost grown
It all went by so fast

I branched out on my own
Hoping to get away
From being treated poorly
I wonder now should I have stayed?

How does one grab and hold on to
Those feelings of happiness
When overcome with sadness
My life seems such a mess

I don't know where to go from here
It seems that I am stuck
In a world that is for young folk
And I have run out of luck

If anyone has any notion
Of what should come to pass
Please pour some in a pitcher
So I may have a glass

That's it! A secret potion
To fill my spirit with hope
Now all I simply have to do
Is hope that I don't choke! lol!


BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 08/30/09 03:21 PM
Edited by BonnyMiss on Sun 08/30/09 03:23 PM
If this reflects your life, then my love you are stronger than you think. You have made the first move towards healing, you have broken the shackles that has kept your spirit captive. There is only one way for you to go now, that's onwards. Fly little sparrow, fly. I know it is a dove, but I thought it was as pretty as you are. flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 08/30/09 04:41 PM

I'm feeling so much sorrow
I can't even say just why
Maybe it's the weather
Or it could just be my life...

The path that I have chosen
Along this journey mine
feel's like life has passed me by
And I'm running out of time

I know I've been alot depressed
How could I not be?
The choices which I have taken
Have been wrought with responsibilities

Suddenly my life seems over
The years they flew right past
The kids' now almost grown
It all went by so fast

I branched out on my own
Hoping to get away
From being treated poorly
I wonder now should I have stayed?

How does one grab and hold on to
Those feelings of happiness
When overcome with sadness
My life seems such a mess

I don't know where to go from here
It seems that I am stuck
In a world that is for young folk
And I have run out of luck

If anyone has any notion
Of what should come to pass
Please pour some in a pitcher
So I may have a glass

That's it! A secret potion
To fill my spirit with hope
Now all I simply have to do
Is hope that I don't choke! lol!


flowerforyou

AZKait's photo
Sun 08/30/09 05:17 PM
Beautiful, and tenderly stated...
flowerforyou

che_'s photo
Sun 08/30/09 07:05 PM
Mirror and AZKait, thank you so much for your comments, sincerely. Hugzzzz!

Missbonny... you are always giving such good advice to others, i enjoy and agree with your comments. Today, you have especially touched my heart... many thanks for your advice, and your copliments and... I just love the dove! Hugzzzz! You are all so supportive here at mingle2, i have never felt so welcoed at any other site, ever. Thank you..

Hugzzz
Christine
flowerforyou flowers flowerforyou