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Topic: "Dark Abstractia"
Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Fri 08/28/09 05:23 PM
"You have it. So use it." faces have begun they're peering through shadows piercing eyes on noseless faces burning violet eyes they seem to sunder at a glance wails and moans rack crooked bodies horns and hands drag on the ground horns and hands dig through me "You had it. So lose it." my faces..... peering right through..... drank their tears..... burning violet tears..... seems at a glance..... racking all crookedness.... horns and hands..... horns and hands on me..... "You hear it. So abuse it." my faces have really begun peering right through all my shadows drank of their tears all night long burning violet tears coursing down seems to burn so with my slightest glance rack all my crookedness for the "end" horns and hands, all staring back in the pews horns and hands on me and you "You want it. So cruise it." no more faces, please I'll leave the shadows, please I just want my eyes, please I JUST WANT MY EYES!!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 08/28/09 06:35 PM
"You have it. So use it." faces have begun they're peering through shadows piercing eyes on noseless faces burning violet eyes they seem to sunder at a glance wails and moans rack crooked bodies horns and hands drag on the ground horns and hands dig through me "You had it. So lose it." my faces..... peering right through..... drank their tears..... burning violet tears..... seems at a glance..... racking all crookedness.... horns and hands..... horns and hands on me..... "You hear it. So abuse it." my faces have really begun peering right through all my shadows drank of their tears all night long burning violet tears coursing down seems to burn so with my slightest glance rack all my crookedness for the "end" horns and hands, all staring back in the pews horns and hands on me and you "You want it. So cruise it." no more faces, please I'll leave the shadows, please I just want my eyes, please I JUST WANT MY EYES!!

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Fri 08/28/09 09:14 PM
Thanks mirror! You're my Number One Fan!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 08/28/09 09:20 PM
is he sure he wants them? sometimes the shadows hide more than we can take (now do i get a number too) haha

Abracadabra Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 17851	Sat 08/29/09 11:41 AM


Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Sat 08/29/09 04:56 PM
is he sure he wants them? sometimes the shadows hide more than we can take (now do i get a number too) haha Statistically speaking, MirrorMirror is almost always the first to comment on my poems, he's got a real good eye! But everyone who reads and comments is number one

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Sat 08/29/09 04:58 PM
That is awesome abra!

SoundMethod Joined Wed 07/22/09 Posts: 42	Sat 08/29/09 05:01 PM
Hail ****ing Satan !!!

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Sat 08/29/09 05:06 PM
Hail ****ing Satan !!!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 08/29/09 06:29 PM
is he sure he wants them? sometimes the shadows hide more than we can take (now do i get a number too) haha Statistically speaking, MirrorMirror is almost always the first to comment on my poems, he's got a real good eye! But everyone who reads and comments is number one oh no! i didnt have you pegged as an a** kisser----- but, to be tied with mirror is not such a bad thing i suppose