Topic: This world is not a world.
crimsonphoenix's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:36 AM
This world is not a world.
Mere visions incircled.
Taunting me.
Possibility.
A loaded word.
Shot off in my brain
Feeding through.
Consuming everything.

Let it bleed; make it breathe.
Through my pores.
From my brain.
Will it still remain?
The cancer bringing life.
Eating away, feeling alive.
Hemorrhaged, hematoma.
Caught in a coma.
No pain…no pain!


A walking vegetable
A dragging zombie
Subservient and pale
Crying puppies.
Time wears away.
I don’t believe this disease.
Deceives so many.
Yet I change. (I change)
into things I hate.

This world is a world.
A mad world.
Lose to win.
Prey to save.
Sanctify sin.
Chaotic and grey.
Jade in our eye.
Conform or die.
Then point the blame.

AZKait's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:46 AM
Wow...I was made to wake up in the middle of the night just to read this...flowers

Iam_aditi's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:50 AM
:thumbsup: Really good :thumbsup:

BMWboy4u's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:55 AM
"Reality" is for people who don't have imagination

crimsonphoenix's photo
Thu 08/27/09 04:09 AM
Azkait thats one of the best compliments i've ever bee given.

thank you. flowerforyou

thank you aditi flowerforyou


I agree BMWboy. drinker

SandFTW's photo
Thu 08/27/09 04:30 AM
huh

crimsonphoenix's photo
Thu 08/27/09 11:59 AM
Edited by crimsonphoenix on Thu 08/27/09 11:59 AM
laugh huh laugh


drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 08/27/09 04:59 PM
flowerforyou Powerful write

crimsonphoenix's photo
Sat 08/29/09 03:06 AM
thank you msteddybear. flowerforyou