So help me improve please =)

cant really see anything wrong....but maybe write in more?

thats all i can think of

Dang girl...if you made any better improvements, it(you)would be illegal!

That is how "smoking hot" you are! Please...we men(most anyway) might not be able to handle the view!

I actually had to put my hand over my pacemaker...just to slow it down!

Just kidding...but all joking aside...I don't know how you could improve it!

Oh, Oh...I got it...send me all of your pictures by Federal Express, make sure they are wrapped in flame retardant material, so they don't hurt anyone! Just kidding again. I think you will do very well, here!! Welcome to this site!

Meh. A few face shots. Lots of " look at this hot body " shots. Very little info in the profile.

I really wouldn't expect much more than the pervs and losers to try contacting you.

While I always recommend lots of pictures I tend to agree these shots are not going to attract the highest caliber of person.

Sad because there are some very high quality young people on this site for you to get to know.

I am sure you have a personality, values, and interests that would deserve representation. Surely you aspire to do something more than go shoe shopping. Not that this time year that is such a bad idea it doesn't take much to get the "fetish crowd" going.

You appear to be a dancer or have yoga training you might want to explain some of your pictures. Are you interested in modeling, photography, or photo essays? Don't miss the poetry/creative forum among others if you are. Welcome to Mingle.