Topic: "IMAGE"
Fusion99's photo
Sat 08/22/09 02:13 PM
image: two small, frail pink flowers
image: she wore them for the view of every passerby
image: his smile for a never possible future
image: hats and backs of every passerby
image: twisted face the moment you forget them
image: two small, frail pink flowers
image: they hide from view of every passerby
image: his smile cuz that's just the way
image: a gentle breeze across their backs
image: I know that look, don't tell me you forgot them
image: a violent head shake, "No, they're always inside."

a dealing with simple concepts,
it's the best way to get you there
forget that old arguement,
the one of I SEE IT ALL THE TIME
but I see them sometimes in slumber
or at ever-present blunders?

now a dealing with question concepts,
it's not the best way to get some of you here:

sleepingintreesloudcrashesandscreams
constantchurnofinsectburnsohhowthestomachturns
aremnantofnucleardepressionnowisntthisheaven
dreamsofflowersandsunhavelongpastawinter
awinterthatbitestheskinaworldfrozenlostintime
andtheicewillmeltjusthavefaithinthe......
catcallsandboosstonesflyfromallarounddeathtothem
tothosethatvoicedissensionfitthemoldordie
buttheicedidstarttomeltandsodidthedespairfora
timebutthenthesleepingdiseaseshitkillingbythebillions
noconsequenceofopinionstoppeditsoitwas

Oh, forget that old arguement,
you've never seen this all the time.

-Here's the question concepts, they are a little hard to readlaugh

sleeping in trees, loud crashes and screams
constant churn of insect burns,Oh how the stomach turns
a remnant of nuclear depression, now isn't this heaven?
dreams of flowers and sun have long past a winter
a winter that bites the skin, a world lost, frozen in time
"And the ice will melt, just have faith in the......"
catcalls and boos, stones fly from all around, death to them,
to those that voice dissension, fit the mold or die!
but the ice did start to melt, and so did the despair, for a
time, but then the sleeping diseases hit, killing by the billions
No consquence of opinion stopped it, so it was. -

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 08/22/09 05:33 PM

image: two small, frail pink flowers
image: she wore them for the view of every passerby
image: his smile for a never possible future
image: hats and backs of every passerby
image: twisted face the moment you forget them
image: two small, frail pink flowers
image: they hide from view of every passerby
image: his smile cuz that's just the way
image: a gentle breeze across their backs
image: I know that look, don't tell me you forgot them
image: a violent head shake, "No, they're always inside."

a dealing with simple concepts,
it's the best way to get you there
forget that old arguement,
the one of I SEE IT ALL THE TIME
but I see them sometimes in slumber
or at ever-present blunders?

now a dealing with question concepts,
it's not the best way to get some of you here:

sleepingintreesloudcrashesandscreams
constantchurnofinsectburnsohhowthestomachturns
aremnantofnucleardepressionnowisntthisheaven
dreamsofflowersandsunhavelongpastawinter
awinterthatbitestheskinaworldfrozenlostintime
andtheicewillmeltjusthavefaithinthe......
catcallsandboosstonesflyfromallarounddeathtothem
tothosethatvoicedissensionfitthemoldordie
buttheicedidstarttomeltandsodidthedespairfora
timebutthenthesleepingdiseaseshitkillingbythebillions
noconsequenceofopinionstoppeditsoitwas

Oh, forget that old arguement,
you've never seen this all the time.

-Here's the question concepts, they are a little hard to readlaugh

sleeping in trees, loud crashes and screams
constant churn of insect burns,Oh how the stomach turns
a remnant of nuclear depression, now isn't this heaven?
dreams of flowers and sun have long past a winter
a winter that bites the skin, a world lost, frozen in time
"And the ice will melt, just have faith in the......"
catcalls and boos, stones fly from all around, death to them,
to those that voice dissension, fit the mold or die!
but the ice did start to melt, and so did the despair, for a
time, but then the sleeping diseases hit, killing by the billions
No consquence of opinion stopped it, so it was. -
:thumbsup:

Fusion99's photo
Sat 08/22/09 07:55 PM
Thanks Mirror!drinker drinker

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 08/23/09 10:01 AM
Oh fusion, damn you! I had just copied all those fused together thoughts and I was going to separate them off line and them come back, but thank you for beating me to it as I continued reading.

rofl rofl

Okay, let me get a grip here, and I'll be back to read in comfortrofl rofl rofl

Fusion99's photo
Sun 08/23/09 01:13 PM
rofl

Oh fusion, damn you! I had just copied all those fused together thoughts and I was going to separate them off line and them come back, but thank you for beating me to it as I continued reading.

rofl rofl

Okay, let me get a grip here, and I'll be back to read in comfortrofl rofl rofl
rofl Thanks different, let me know how it turns out:heart:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 08/23/09 01:48 PM
Made me think about making up my own mind about stuff. My thoughts have often pondered how people society called mad were really on to something, but it was soooo vastly different from the "norm" it had to be madness! This write states that for me pretty well, so thank's for finding the words as I shake my head while free thinkers continue to be labeled and ridiculed ---- till it's too late for the "norm" but not for their descendants.

Fusion99's photo
Sun 08/23/09 01:51 PM

Made me think about making up my own mind about stuff. My thoughts have often pondered how people society called mad were really on to something, but it was soooo vastly different from the "norm" it had to be madness! This write states that for me pretty well, so thank's for finding the words as I shake my head while free thinkers continue to be labeled and ridiculed ---- till it's too late for the "norm" but not for their descendants.
Wow, different, that was really deep. I really appreciate your insightdrinker drinker :heart:

no photo
Sun 08/23/09 02:42 PM
good write:thumbsup:

Fusion99's photo
Sun 08/23/09 03:13 PM

good write:thumbsup:
Thank you and welcome to the sitedrinker

LAMom's photo
Mon 08/24/09 08:40 AM
flowers (Fusion)

Everytime I step into your world,, I see a bit more of your
spirit,,,

Pure poetry in motion,, flowers flowers

Fusion99's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:13 AM

flowers (Fusion)

Everytime I step into your world,, I see a bit more of your
spirit,,,

Pure poetry in motion,, flowers flowers
You are like concentrated sugar!laugh laugh Thanks for your kind words LAsmooched smooched

LAMom's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:18 AM


flowers (Fusion)

Everytime I step into your world,, I see a bit more of your
spirit,,,

Pure poetry in motion,, flowers flowers
You are like concentrated sugar!laugh laugh Thanks for your kind words LAsmooched smooched


I'll take that,,, Concentrated sugar!!!!!
laugh Ya that works for me




TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:26 AM
Wow what can I say except I have not seen this before and glad I took the moment to look. Could be we all pass the things in life we feel we have already seen and don't take the time to really look as we should. For no two things in life are exactly the same..........So take the time to stop and smell those roses you thought were like all the rest............good one:thumbsup:

MzEm's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:28 AM
Wow man, that is rightous joint right there. I sat back and inhaled your smoke and let it enter my brain with out a filter....

Okay I been in too many poetry houses...laugh

Good work....

Fusion99's photo
Mon 08/24/09 04:46 PM

Wow what can I say except I have not seen this before and glad I took the moment to look. Could be we all pass the things in life we feel we have already seen and don't take the time to really look as we should. For no two things in life are exactly the same..........So take the time to stop and smell those roses you thought were like all the rest............good one:thumbsup:
Thank you, and I really like your writing too!! Keep em coming!drinker drinker

Fusion99's photo
Mon 08/24/09 04:47 PM

Wow man, that is rightous joint right there. I sat back and inhaled your smoke and let it enter my brain with out a filter....

Okay I been in too many poetry houses...laugh

Good work....
You sure you was smokin on my words MzEm? laugh laugh Thanks my friend:heart: