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Topic: A walk with Compassion
LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 08/12/09 02:36 PM
A walk with Compassion You see her, walking down the street Worn, tired,, as if life has thrown her to her feet Circles so deep upon the eyes of light You see her, walking down the street Wondering,, what has brought this women to her knees You see her, Yet you look upon her with horror in your eyes You gawk,, and turn away Some look on with compassion Some Eye-idolly stare You see.... This women walks with compassion A depth of peace unknown, to the naked eye This women has lived a life of love Blessed in all she does This women birth'd pure-ness so rare This women, her battle lives inside Cancer consumes her every step Eating her deepest thoughts Yet, This women.... Survives And Just breathe's.. Enjoying her Walk of compassion her way of life.....

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 08/12/09 02:38 PM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/12/09 02:46 PM
oh my God, so very much

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 08/12/09 02:49 PM
WONDERFUL!!!

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Wed 08/12/09 02:50 PM
Beautiful

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/12/09 02:55 PM
Ya know, you would expect ranting and raving about injustice, fairness, and a scrEAMING need to understand why? I've looked for this, I've expected this and all I can say is how can I? When a loving light is projected soooo strongly that I can only see the beauty ------- all I can do is reflect it back, I'm powerless to do anything but that!

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 08/12/09 03:12 PM
Namaste

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 08/12/09 03:45 PM
you being you......

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Wed 08/12/09 04:59 PM
A walk with Compassion You see her, walking down the street Worn, tired,, as if life has thrown her to her feet Circles so deep upon the eyes of light You see her, walking down the street Wondering,, what has brought this women to her knees You see her, Yet you look upon her with horror in your eyes You gawk,, and turn away Some look on with compassion Some Eye-idolly stare You see.... This women walks with compassion A depth of peace unknown, to the naked eye This women has lived a life of love Blessed in all she does This women birth'd pure-ness so rare This women, her battle lives inside Cancer consumes her every step Eating her deepest thoughts Yet, This women.... Survives And Just breathe's.. Enjoying her Walk of compassion her way of life..... And here is yet another of the true poets on the site. Bringing me tears, and smiles and joy in her never ending perception. I love you Denise.

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Wed 08/12/09 07:43 PM
Very nice Denise!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 08/13/09 09:03 AM
Thank you for walking the walk with me Namaste'

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Thu 08/13/09 07:11 PM
I know this woman that continues to walk no matter what life throws her way. It's always a honor to walk with this woman at that so can I walk with you again today my dear friend?...............

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 08/13/09 07:14 PM
A walk with Compassion You see her, walking down the street Worn, tired,, as if life has thrown her to her feet Circles so deep upon the eyes of light You see her, walking down the street Wondering,, what has brought this women to her knees You see her, Yet you look upon her with horror in your eyes You gawk,, and turn away Some look on with compassion Some Eye-idolly stare You see.... This women walks with compassion A depth of peace unknown, to the naked eye This women has lived a life of love Blessed in all she does This women birth'd pure-ness so rare This women, her battle lives inside Cancer consumes her every step Eating her deepest thoughts Yet, This women.... Survives And Just breathe's.. Enjoying her Walk of compassion her way of life.....

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 08/13/09 07:55 PM
I know this woman that continues to walk no matter what life throws her way. It's always a honor to walk with this woman at that so can I walk with you again today my dear friend?............... Every moment, every step,, every fall,, its you right there walking side by side with me,,,, (( Mirror ))))

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Thu 08/13/09 11:27 PM
(((((((((Denise))))))))

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 08/14/09 06:43 AM
you my dear lady are one of the most caring,loving and strongest women I know...hugs and love

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 08/14/09 06:49 AM
your observations, always full of compassion and love

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Fri 08/14/09 10:54 AM
I know this woman that continues to walk no matter what life throws her way. It's always a honor to walk with this woman at that so can I walk with you again today my dear friend?............... Every moment, every step,, every fall,, its you right there walking side by side with me,,,, (( Mirror ))))

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 08/14/09 03:58 PM
Compassion is a way of life...how beautifully stated (((D)))

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Sun 08/16/09 05:21 AM
((((((((((((((((Denise))))))))))))) There aren't enough tears or love in the world to express how this touched me reading it today. As always my beautiful friend, you walk with Grace and Beauty found do rarely.... You are always in my heart and prayers...