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For Sale: everything, Wanted: wedding ring. 
Thank you... what we choose to buy keep and sell often define where we are in our lives. So telling the reader those things can say volumes. Makes it easy and probably why Hemingway chose the format. Possible scenarios for Hemingway were all the depressing to say the least the infant did not survive etc or the infant had deformed legs and millions of possibilities like that I took a more comical theme to that which was the infant had bigger feet for the ordinary child being the child of the Yati 
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Soft on outside Tough on inside That is the other way round
Nope I said it the way I meant it! 
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doubled over, I'm sorry, gun smoked
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doubled over, I'm sorry, gun smoked Blood oozes. Helpless whisper. I'm sorry. Thanks for the inspiration Davey |
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Icy grip. Lungs contracted. Water rising.
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Edited by
DaveyB
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Wed 08/05/09 02:32 PM
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water rising, cold, dark, final thoughts
and thank you for your inspiration ArtGurl |
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The phone rings. Held breath. Cancer....
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Muddy shoes, warm gun... "It's done"
Doing these I can't help but think of Richard Brautigan and my absolutely favorite short story. It's so simple and had such an impact that I remember it word for word to this day (read it in high school) "It's hard living next door to a man who's learning to play the violin.". That's what she told the police as she handed them the empty revolver. |
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Icy grip. Lungs contracted. Water rising. 
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Dense forest,prayers abound,flickering light.
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Candle lights, wilted flower, rejected again.
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A gasp for air, tightening grip, multiple orgasm
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Naked heart, unclothed mind, final peace
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bright moon, cold heart, still water
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wretched fear, inner strength, opened door
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mistakes made
lessons learned forward motion |
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new life
new name same person |
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Sorry Bob... I got started and couldn't stop
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new life new name same person 
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This family hurts, it mustn't continue
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