As he tells me to smile

he does not know

i have tears running

just at a heavy heavy flow

for the sound of my words

does not show

how i am really feeling

he should never never know

he thinks he can make me happy

he really wants to try

he does not understand why

or why or why

but he thinks he can win

he thinks its good to begin

with this he really does not know

what i never let show

i feel his love deeper than me

i feel his need for children

not me

i feel the love he has yet to share

for his kids never knew he was there

he was never really there

for the life was but a dream

with his selfish esteem

he secured his man in bed

he secured himself in head

he thought that was all it was

he thought that was love

he still has no idea

that the thoughts he can not hear

will be the ultimate orgasm

he will not be the one she holds dear

for when love is complete

you never feel the bottom of your feet

when you know its real

yes its scary to really feel

the weight does not exists

the room floats in a mist

the sky has not a end

and you would first and always

call her friend

for she took the time to know you

like you didnt know yourself

she took the time to help you

understand what you felt

she did this in hopes maybe it would be she

that you decided you would be free

instead you seen restraints without a end

and still you called her friend

problem with a end

Nice.

"...he secured his man in bed

he secured himself in head

he thought that was all it was

he thought that was love

he still has no idea..."


Wow your write was just fantastic...That quote up there of yours^^^^^..So many men can learn from that...Bloody awesome write...